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JaeBurnz354 vs GKillaz05
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-05-04 at 03:18 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-05-04 02:26 PM.
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Call yourself a dopehead cuz you rep my pic on your hat...
But when you spit you sound 'whack' like a baseball bat... I'll put my gat in your mouth so you can spit a solid bar... I rise like the sun... got you runnin' like your a solar car... That line shut you up dont interupt you'll sound dumber... Your only spitten hot shit becuz I hired you as my plumber... JaeBurnz is unwanted his rhymes are foreign like egyptians... No way ima lose this, battlin' Mr. Burns from The Simpsons... Movin Slow-Mo Im runnin' you over in my John Deer tractor... Im leavin ya scared to battle me... like im your fear factor... |
JaeBurnz354 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-05-04 02:50 PM.
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Why even accept this battle knowing you won't win...
I'm on another level so meet my balls, they both twins/ Treat ya neck like springs they way I jump on you... So if my rhymes garbage, I'ma let a whole lot dump on you/ My flow is complicated and it stay stumping fags... Look nigga you open for shots like a punching bag/ You swinging for punchlines to connect but you missing... I got that sick flow why you think ya stomach twisting/ 10 lines is all I need to rip you like meat off chicken bones... Don't Throw punches, cuz i'm the wonr one to be hitting on/ |
Voted For: GKillaz05
Jae: Why even accept this battle knowing you won't win... I'm on another level so meet my balls, they both twins/ 3/10 Treat ya neck like springs they way I jump on you... So if my rhymes garbage, I'ma let a whole lot dump on you/ 4/10 My flow is complicated and it stay stumping fags... Look nigga you open for shots like a punching bag/ 2/10 You swinging for punchlines to connect but you missing... I got that sick flow why you think ya stomach twisting/ 3/10 10 lines is all I need to rip you like meat off chicken bones... Don't Throw punches, cuz i'm the wonr one to be hitting on/ 4/10 wasent feelin your stuff it rhymed but you need punches... GKillaz05: Call yourself a dopehead cuz you rep my pic on your hat... But when you spit you sound 'whack' like a baseball bat... 4/10 I'll put my gat in your mouth so you can spit a solid bar... I rise like the sun... got you runnin' like your a solar car... 6/10 That line shut you up dont interupt you'll sound dumber... Your only spitten hot shit becuz I hired you as my plumber... 7/10 JaeBurnz is unwanted his rhymes are foreign like egyptians... No way ima lose this, battlin' Mr. Burns from The Simpsons... 8/10 Movin Slow-Mo Im runnin' you over in my John Deer tractor... Im leavin ya scared to battle me... like im your fear factor... 7/10 i was feelin this good...opener was weak and kinda played tho... |
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Voted For: GKillaz05
I think that GKillaz05 got this battle because i feel that GKillaz05 came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt GKillaz05 got it they were used effectifely and were on point JaeBurnz354 u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to GKillaz05 good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to GKillaz05 and flow and structure i'll give to GKillaz05. V/GKillaz05 There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly |
Voted For: GKillaz05
Not really a close one this. open: G: "Call yourself a dopehead cuz you rep my pic on your hat... But when you spit you sound 'whack' like a baseball bat...". I Liked this, meta use and it looked good. Sorry Joe, but i didnt want to hear about your balls. lol close: G: "Movin Slow-Mo Im runnin' you over in my John Deer tractor... Im leavin ya scared to battle me... like im your fear factor..." Also good, entertaining and used skill. Joe, im not too sure what you were even goin on about there bro. Joe: your best bit was about the punchbags but overall not a brilliant verse. Your vocab was good but no real use of personals and the punches were a lot weaker than GKilla's GKillaz05: A good verse. Capable of beating many. The punches were real good, all landed and were funny, entertaing as hell. Good amount of vocab, overall a definate winner in this battle |
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Kid we did take time to vote on this at least RTF...
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Voted For: GKillaz05
GKillaz05 Call yourself a dopehead cuz you rep my pic on your hat... But when you spit you sound 'whack' like a baseball bat... (DOPE OPENER...WORDPLAY GOOD...MULTIE USE...FLOWED...9/10) I'll put my gat in your mouth so you can spit a solid bar... I rise like the sun... got you runnin' like your a solar car... (NICE FLOW, PUNCH, WORDPLAY...8/10) That line shut you up dont interupt you'll sound dumber... Your only spitten hot shit becuz I hired you as my plumber... (LMAO...NICE DISS HERE...FLOWED GOOD AS WELL...9/10) JaeBurnz is unwanted his rhymes are foreign like egyptians... No way ima lose this, battlin' Mr. Burns from The Simpsons... (HAHA...DECENT BAR HERE...FLOWED AIGHT...CREATIVE...8/10) Movin Slow-Mo Im runnin' you over in my John Deer tractor... Im leavin ya scared to battle me... like im your fear factor... (LMAO...KILLED HIM WITH THIS BAR...NICE PUNCH, PERSONAL, MULTIE USE...AND FLOWED WELL...9/10) YOUR FLOW WAS AWSOME...STRUCTURE GOOD...YOU USED NICE WORD PLAY, VOCAB GOOD...PUNCHES WERE EVERYWHERE...YOUR FIRST AND LAST BARS COULD HAVE KILLED HIM ALONE...MY ONLY SUGGESTION TO YOU IS TO NOT PUT ... THESE IN YOUR VERSE...IT MAKES IT LOOK KINDA NOT WE THOUGHT IF THAT MAKES SENSE...OTHER THAN THAT MAYN...IT WAS FIRE...YOU GOT MY VOTE... JaeBurnz354 Why even accept this battle knowing you won't win... I'm on another level so meet my balls, they both twins/ (DECENT OPENER I SPOSE...PLAYED OUT...NOT PUNCHES....6/10) Treat ya neck like springs they way I jump on you... So if my rhymes garbage, I'ma let a whole lot dump on you/ (DECENT BAR, BUT STILL NOT GOOD HIT...BE MORE CREATIVE...6/10) My flow is complicated and it stay stumping fags... Look nigga you open for shots like a punching bag/ (KINDA SELF GLORIFACATION, BUT U MADE THIS BAR WORK IN A WAY...GOOD FLOW WITH IT...YOUR BEST BAR I THINK...7/10) You swinging for punchlines to connect but you missing... I got that sick flow why you think ya stomach twisting/ (NICE FLOW, AND TOPIC BUT ITS NOT A DISS OR PUNCH...6/10) 10 lines is all I need to rip you like meat off chicken bones... Don't Throw punches, cuz i'm the wonr one to be hitting on/ (I KNO WHAT YOU MEAN WITH THAT BAR, BUT IT DIDNT END ON FLOW, AND AGAIN NO PUNCH, DISS, MULTIE....NOTHING...WEAK CLOSER...6/10) AIGHT MAYNE...YOU HAVE AN AIGHT VERSE, I AM NOT SURE HOW EXPERIENCED THAT YOU ARE, BUT IN A BATTLE THE OBJECTIVE IS TO STR8 UP DISS THE DUDE YOU ARE STANDING AGAINTS...YOU NEED TO WORK ON BEING MORE RAW, AND BEING MORE CREATIVE...TRY NOT TO MAKE URESELF SOUND SO GOOD, AND TOUGH...LET YOUR WORDS DO THAT FOR YOU...YOU AINT GOT TO PROVE NOTHING TO ANYONE HERE EXCEPT YOURSEFL...I MEAN YOU HAVE SOME TALENT, BUT MAYBE BATTLING ISNT YOUR FORTAY...I THINK WRITING OPEN MICS AND SHIT ARE...ANYWAYS, ELEVATE SOME, AND TRY AGAIN... MY VOTE GOES TO GKillaz05...*NUFF SAID* |
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Voted For: GKillaz05
V/GKILLAZ05...close battle but G got this wit harder punchs an multi's it flowed well also....jae u had a good flow but ur punchs were weak an u need to elavate... punchs=G Multis=G vocab=G flow=tie overall=G *RETURN THE FAVOR* |
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