D. Cepth Shun vs Upfront
 

Battle Rules:

6 - lines dont exceed
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
you check in and spit first
um ya...

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-14-04 at 08:48 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

upfront has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 08:18 PM.

D. Cepth Shun has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 08:23 PM.

ayo...

when i asked if ya mom had an occupation blow jobs didnt count/
but i guess u were distracted cuz she was given my dick mouth to mouth/

listen up i throw empty shells at ya head like ammunition/
got u in a state of mind where u mus b put in submission/

poetically devine from ya ass u jus cant compare/
ask me to spit six bars in 20 minutes u better beware/
cuz i touch down wit s0o much heat it leaves ya ass in dispair/
nigga u think u run dis site i been sent to tell u im in tha captains chair da bullets dat hit ya head i collected and became a billionaire///////

~peace~

Always upfront, that’s true, you the first in line to get beat.
Watch him try to post his verse, and get 6 lines incomplete!
And after your silly words, it’s true ya gonna leave me behind.
Cause I’ll be laughing my ass off at all the lines you designed.
Upfront is a fucking retard, brain's dimmer than a broken lamp.
And didn’t go to the military, was forced to stay in boot camp!

if you don't get it, don't vote!

This was feedback posted for D. Cepth Shun
 

look i aint gonna vote on one of my homies but c depth was harder...

upping fasho..........................

uppin less get it ovaaaaaaaa

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This was feedback posted for D. Cepth Shun
 

checkin it out

uppin

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Voted For: D. Cepth Shun

up- nah i dont like the bad structure/rhyme scheme and played punches. try to use more personals, peep the tutorials and look at some verses from vets.....3/10
d cept- ehh the punches was coo, not the shit but coo. structure was mad good, wordplay was there overall a pretty decent verse ;) .....6/10

return the favor...links in the sig :thumbup:

btw...the wink was cuz i know who you are....not very slick partnr.....lmao!

shud i ROFL now??????