Have you ever felt like
 

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listening, def not my style beat. gotta succeed parts tight.
man, the flow is sick, emotion is def there, lyrics are motivational, i like how your really yourself on the beat.
2nd verse,lyrics are sick but i liked the first verse better.
liked the switch up part transitioned nicely.
i see this track as a motivational track no lyrics really stuck out to me, like rhyme scheme wise, the the energy you brought and the words you used and the message you sent was sick. overall 8/10
i would never attempt a beat like this but you did it well.