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BWALLakaILLNESS Vs. Dabatos
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Battles Go Up Friday Check In Due Sunday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time Verses Due Tuesday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time Voting Ends Thursday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time 20 Lines Minimum 40 Lines Maximum No Biting No Recycling Do Not Go Over The Line Limit Or Under The Line Limit Meaning No Less Than 20 Lines No More Than 40 Lines You Must Vote On 3 Battles Per Week And Edit Them Into Your Check-In.. If You Dont Do So, Youre Banned From The Tourney The Following Week Topic: Violence |
checkin in
checkin in for this....good luck to Dabatos...interested in how this will play out :spit: :spit:
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Check.. y u put me up against him??? Well good luck
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Dabatos asked for a topic change so its up to bwallakaillness if he would like a different topic or not..
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yea, change the topic man, cuz i've already done this freaken topic!!
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ok its aight if ya change the topic
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iight...coo.. change topic now flow!!!
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Ok new topic is
The Blind Eye You Have Until 11:59 PM eastern time to drop a verse |
U serious?? lol, iight, i'll do it wen i get home at 7PM western time cuz im at work rite now.. and it will be wut time there?? 11 pm?? that's not fair.. i have an hour! LOL...
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Blind World.. Tell me why you call these super celeberties so great!! They so rich, but still nothin to charity they donate.. O wait,They just have to much time for them selves, To spend all of them wealth, and just time for others they got no space.. How about these ppl in need most, who u never notice.. U look down to like roaches, who's souls are so hopeless.. Thinkin u better all just cuz they all so homeless... Thinkin u better cuz in life, they never did focus.. They just in need of more medicine, some are war veteran's.. These American's eat for dinner are only crumbs from small M & M's.. All they ever ask is to spare only a few change.. So do somethin for a change, just spare them that horrible pain.. But lets talk bout somethin different, bout wuts happen'n at this instant.. Like bout 2 hundred thousand death's, includin drownin infant's.. These countries in so much need, who Bush barely helped.. Who never even cared about the pain these people felt.. So listen, first I start of with the numberal one!! Cuz of bush, U'll hear more cries for wen funeral's come.. All because of these unusual guns.. Killin all of our own soldiers, The most beautiful ones.. |
Im guessing I won?? LoL, wow, My verse is so dope! No one could of beaten me wit dat verse *cough* lol
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yeah had to work too heres my verse tho
The Blind Eye
Government takin control having descretion not knowing whos on parol The system workin for the oppression and not showing nation true goal Societies lookin right at it but they dont even see People unprotected sex getting herpes and HIV White blood cells deminishing dont see needle injectin self sexually feeble Women gettin prego...i aint talkin dressin they sleepin with too many people Gun laws dropped Nra holiday...little kids getting heat killin accidental spray Drive bys constantly running society policy so far away from the gunnin Drugs are trafficin the streets giving ghetto child a job and somethin to eat Coke misunderstood by society whether its powder or crak get black easily Jails lockin dogs up like pound for sellin bones when their sentece shows murder... Cant convict the guily only the innocent for lack of support and the bias jurror... Tsunami hit foreign yet we still supply with out look at home front People loosing jobs due to rich bastards private business donut Peeps still at war fightin the lost cause ask bush he'll think n pause Showing progresss not in the win collumn but by how many bodies blew up car bomb... Iraq people saying gihad holy war strappin selfs with plastic kamikaze blowin kingdom com... Find ourselfs spraying back like we leak oil only real reason for war was fuel price boil... Kwait rich in black gold people spillin red needing oil change kids shot with few to brain... kids in class room get ak teacher says soldier + iraq = kid answers spray government says we pullin out but pussy too good to go so cummin slow to roll out... Monopoly call it boardwalk walmart lose local business to low prices then high to start... Illegal degrees getting posted on the web to learn 3 of um are owned by nuclear heads... People dont know whats goin on stayin with life just giving you contacts for your blind eye :spit: :spit: |
heres my three votes
limit vs trauma
white ave and acuity final vs mista_auth3ntic theres my votes for the other battles..peace |
DABA gets this one she had a better strucutre her topic scheme was good and she flowed better to help me understand it more.
Tell me why you call these super celeberties so great!! They so rich, but still nothin to charity they donate.. O wait,They just have to much time for them selves, To spend all of them wealth, and just time for others they got no space.. How about these ppl in need most, who u never notice.. U look down to like roaches, who's souls are so hopeless.. Thinkin u better all just cuz they all so homeless... Thinkin u better cuz in life, they never did focus.. They just in need of more medicine, some are war veteran's.. These American's eat for dinner are only crumbs from small M & M's.. All they ever ask is to spare only a few change.. 18.7/20 Government takin control having descretion not knowing whos on parol The system workin for the oppression and not showing nation true goal Societies lookin right at it but they dont even see People unprotected sex getting herpes and HIV White blood cells deminishing dont see needle injectin self sexually feeble Women gettin prego...i aint talkin dressin they sleepin with too many people Gun laws dropped Nra holiday...little kids getting heat killin accidental spray Drive bys constantly running society policy so far away from the gunnin Drugs are trafficin the streets giving ghetto child a job and somethin to eat Coke misunderstood by society whether its powder or crak get black easily Jails lockin dogs up like pound for sellin bones when their sentece shows murder... Cant convict the guily only the innocent for lack of support and the bias jurror... Tsunami hit foreign yet we still supply with out look at home front 17/20 u had a good strucutre also but it was hard for me to follow vt/daba |
bwall u didnt drop your verse by the deadline dabatos wins by no show
dabatos +3 b.wallakaillness -4 |
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