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''Dust On My Feet'' - <<<Random Rhymes!>>>
Hook:
I got some dust on my feet.. livin in the street, it hurts, we heal.. we steal, we do things u dont wanna see but whatever it is, when it comes ta me.. the package is nothin but REAL! Verse 1: I've see an done things... that'd put Bloods ta Shame Crips know my name, an the GD Folk love how i run game i run ho trains............an let the homies have a little Fun dont need protection, so when she seeds an has a lil son its lookin like me, solo, E.C an Deezy all rolled into One (ha haa) hit it then i'm gone, back ta hangin on the block like street lights just because i'm country, dont mean i dont need fights dont get it twisted, we grip the grain an punch out ya icy grill niggas hate me but try deny like ''yo this teph kids Nice-but, still..'' but still what?! ..i'm hot, your not..you cant sit an tell me i dont rock you might get shot an i got u catchin more ''tips'' than a ''block'' so here...lemme brake it down clown, ya cant walk in my shoes sing my blues, i'm young an hung, i dont need twenty-two's i dont stunt or show off, i just get the girl an get the respect i bring my flows in cash, so why the fuck i wanna mic check?! Hook: I got some dust on my feet.. livin in the street, it hurts, we heal.. we steal, we do things u dont wanna see but whatever it is, when it comes ta me.. the package is nothin but REAL! Verse 2: it gets no better than This, tephlon rappin rings round Emcees a mad dog, tru gangstarr, just ask the real about my steez niggas talkin that shit, an i'm allergic, so watch me sneeze i aint even gotta rhyme against y'all niggas, you embaress yourself so pleaze believe, when i say, i'm sick, but i got perfect health? y'all cant ''touch that'' like 4 footers trynna reach the top shelf so u understand me more clear, glue ya eyes too ya rear.. so visions of me stompin that ass will always re-appear dont think i dont hear what u say, i'm huntin down my prey i'm schoolin y'all niggas with hardknocks, an this is the opening day!!!!! Hook: I got some dust on my feet.. livin in the street, it hurts, we heal.. we steal, we do things u dont wanna see but whatever it is, when it comes ta me.. the package is nothin but REAL! Verse 3: ilisten up i got a story ta tell, an these are the stories i tell so well i hope u dont get offended if your female................... but get by yourself an read my words in full detail :thumbup: girl was like a beach whale, but they need love too its around 3am, an the drinks was flowin, yea i had a few me, my crew...an this big bitch didnt know what ta do she was callin my boys boo, whisper ''teph i really want you'' puller up her skirt an asked me ta come thru....(huh?!) girl ya belly covers ya coohie, an your a well known hoochie next thing ya know...she pullin at 4 dicks sceamin ''shoot-me, shoot-me!'' an that was the end of that tail...an with girls like her... ....................you can see why Tha Q loves the males! but naw i wont fail, i swing the right way, an stay on the field its tha tikz!!!...we fresh as what u got locked in a zip when its sealed! kneel down, lick the dust off my feet so i can go thru it all again i dont need a pen, i come live as courage on E.S.P.N Once again, i'll tell u its tha tikz, then fuck off u little shits.. you faggots dropped the ball like greasy baseball Mits!!!!! :shoot: Hook: I got some dust on my feet.. livin in the street, it hurts, we heal.. we steal, we do things u dont wanna see but whatever it is, when it comes ta me.. the package is nothin but REAL! |
LMFAO...hot shit my nigga...man we ABSOLUTLY HAVE TO COLLAB...PM me if u get ideas...but dis is sick dawg...8/10 cuz i aint gotta verse on it...lol...TIKZ
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word, man....
check a thread by B-E-Z about a collab, i'm on that with him, u drop a verse too..... |
uppin fa feeeeed...
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yo, this woz hot shit T, lost its flow on 1 or two lines but that didnt affect it 2 much. 8/10
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yer, im kinda lukin for a collab aswell............
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lol thanks......
uppin this. |
damn, that was a good spit dawg, keep up T
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Amazin, u kept to the story n flowed all the way man
Love it :) got some funny lines 2 |
This was a good drop i was really feeling it ,
Structure was okay , could have been better You Had some nice punchlines , some good solid ones.. Some were alittle weak and fell short Concept was good, you had some nice wordplay nice vocab , and some nice creativity.. overall this was a dope drop..keep it up , and drop a link or this will be closed |
left feed on mizz fyre's peice, i'll edit the link later on.
thanks for the feed from y'all tho, i appreciate that, uppin... |
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yer..this shit was hot...that last verse was funny as fuck...ya belly covers ya coochie..haha...this was good..pretty serious..nice how you jus came like that and then had some comedy in the last verse...good how u had the topic but then just came with random rhymes..nice concept..deffo look out for your other stuff..keep em up...pz
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thanks ^^^
favor will be returned because i can see an Open Mic I AM JUST DYIN TA READ (Diss too cali) |
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good shit homie .................................10/10......................... hit me if you wanna collab, probubly wont want to nice shit nice punchlines tight flow and rythm |
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