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Virus T.S. vs K-M
Battle Rules:
20 lines No Recycling No Biting No Beef Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-26-07 at 02:03 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Closed - Expired battle win |
K-M has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-07 02:05 AM.
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i come to rip emcees on the scene as i awake.... turn T.S. into an evacuated patient as an enemy and a fake.... rip your muscles out your skin then feed u the protein in mix.... have u vomit the shit then maybe you'll pack a solid hit with a punch quick..... your lyrical progressions a blurr like eye sight stigmatism.... ......never heated so they dont burn scripts.... you could be like a vaccination against weak immune systems.... ......this "Virus" still wouldn't "Turn Sick" (T.S.).... Ive earned my keep you just a noobie so learn the ropes kid... it wouldn't surprise me if FLY-E "used his own rhymes" to beat you.... .......and still earned a prone win.... the only time you a heavy weight is with your belt size XXL with pants... .....so like "fatsos in a walking marathon wishing to be thin at last".... ..... try "running" against me for a "win" it might give u a "slim chance"..... the truth is your text styles older than 1508 printed literature readings.... .......try bringing some original modern day wisdom.... but when u lay down rhymes its a "sloppy mess so obseen"..... ....... this kid really is suffering "Teret Syndrome" (T.S.).... battling you i'll contain you like organisms under microscopes making movements.... or i'll simply eradicate you from quaranteen sites like lab infected biology students..... ....~1~ good luck |
Virus T.S. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-07 08:59 AM.
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You rep RB sound dumb on this RV like robin williams in RV
Ya stink you need the right guard matta fact the whole offensive line g Son ya 2-2 in the battle league you got 2 in a row sounds like a streak Until ya find out who he beat..... A dude who's 1-3 and a n00b PLUS ya got both wins this week Ya rhymes is wack ya flows corny wack raps and bunched Ya had all those dots..................... to set up in ya battle against mystic IM STILL WAITIN FOR THE PUNCH Ill hit you in the head dont know what your sayin I ll hit you in the temple so hard I'll make ya start prayin Yo ~1~ <<<<<<< that shows you aint straight ya rhymes are worse Save the best for last thats why im battlin Fly-E second you first Leave ya in rips ya know get the script flipped and yo See ya avy thats shit's easier to read than your twisted flow Bitten is your shit and im the illest describe shit you spittin He had a bright future but the higher he rose faded his chances of winnin Ya wack twidget spark it and honestly a punk spittin fake he bitch Use the next couple of lines to describe what the meanin of his shit Son you use dots whenever you type how you stallin in a written Check the colors on his sig they kinda describe him LISTEN This kids rattle use the next line to start my other battle _______________________________________________ eh.. just keyed |
Voted For: Virus T.S.
I vote for u jus cus u did some tight research and a negative to k-m is that u still bring old news and when ur tryin to diss u need to make sure that its true but other then that ur verse was nice to so no hate or n/e thing trust me both ya'll cats was straight this will be a close battle but u got my vote especially since u a newbie spittin at sumone whos been on here in for a while and u proved urself! |
Voted For: K-M
v/k-m for not coming completley whack...and having some good lines here and there T.S. u whack no hate. |
This was feedback posted for K-M
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make sure from now on to have full votes not 1/2 votes like mystic and explain it id appreciate if yall could give a lil more feedback and explanations
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hmmm its a tie so far.....nice verse virus for an off the top....yeah lets get more votes....~1~
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Voted For: K-M
i come to rip emcees on the scene as i awake.... turn T.S. into an evacuated patient as an enemy and a fake.... aight... no punch... rip your muscles out your skin then feed u the protein in mix.... have u vomit the shit then maybe you'll pack a solid hit with a punch quick..... ok... your lyrical progressions a blurr like eye sight stigmatism.... ......never heated so they dont burn scripts.... you could be like a vaccination against weak immune systems.... aight... ......this "Virus" still wouldn't "Turn Sick" (T.S.).... Ive earned my keep you just a noobie so learn the ropes kid... it wouldn't surprise me if FLY-E "used his own rhymes" to beat you.... .......and still earned a prone win.... lol lol.... the only time you a heavy weight is with your belt size XXL with pants... .....so like "fatsos in a walking marathon wishing to be thin at last".... ..... try "running" against me for a "win" it might give u a "slim chance"..... nice... the truth is your text styles older than 1508 printed literature readings.... .......try bringing some original modern day wisdom.... but when u lay down rhymes its a "sloppy mess so obseen"..... decent... ....... this kid really is suffering "Teret Syndrome" (T.S.).... battling you i'll contain you like organisms under microscopes making movements.... or i'll simply eradicate you from quaranteen sites like lab infected biology students..... decent ending... nice flow... the creativeness was pretty good... the diss was decent not a bad verse... but i've seen better with harder punches but not a bad verse ..... You rep RB sound dumb on this RV like robin williams in RV Ya stink you need the right guard matta fact the whole offensive line g decent start... Son ya 2-2 in the battle league you got 2 in a row sounds like a streak Until ya find out who he beat..... A dude who's 1-3 and a n00b PLUS ya got both wins this week decent personal... Ya rhymes is wack ya flows corny wack raps and bunched Ya had all those dots..................... to set up in ya battle against mystic IM STILL WAITIN FOR THE PUNCH aight... Ill hit you in the head dont know what your sayin I ll hit you in the temple so hard I'll make ya start prayin aight... Yo ~1~ <<<<<<< that shows you aint straight ya rhymes are worse Save the best for last thats why im battlin Fly-E second you first lol lol... its mad funny how ya both use fly-e to diss ya opponit lol lol... Leave ya in rips ya know get the script flipped and yo See ya avy thats shit's easier to read than your twisted flow eeeh... Bitten is your shit and im the illest describe shit you spittin He had a bright future but the higher he rose faded his chances of winnin aight... Ya wack twidget spark it and honestly a punk spittin fake he bitch Use the next couple of lines to describe what the meanin of his shit just flow'in no diss... Son you use dots whenever you type how you stallin in a written Check the colors on his sig they kinda describe him LISTEN aight... This kids rattle use the next line to start my other battle filler.... nice verse... some good bars some average bars... the creativeness was decent... but at the end.... i think k-m just edge this battle out a bit with more solid name flips and diss.... this was a nice battle thou really close but i think k-m just edge this out thou... but at the end no-body really lose... cuz 300 J.G WE STILL RUNING THIS RAP SHIT!!! CHEA! |
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