"The Intro To My Album"
 

nice man
 

keep doing it..........

Looking For Feedback Pimps..

~R~

it said it cant b found or sum shit......

Ok I'm a be real cuz I hate bullshit feed an if u gone do a album u need real feed.....first ya vocals are way too low....or beat is too loud its one of the two but ya levels is off...second your pronounciation is bad....I could only make it make out 2 to 3 words in each line u spit.....chorus wasn't understandable.....u gotta slow down, I know u wanna rap fast but jus cuz u like the slyle doesn't mean it fits you...your mumbling words trying to keep flow an becuz of this it affects ya delivery, my suggestion is you give yourself time to develop before u put out a album cuz first impressions is lasting, an if ya first album people hate they'll always view u as wack.

i agree with sum of wat N said........... turn ur lyrics up alil............. and sum lines u do mumble and they seem rushed, but juss keep recordin it untill u get it right....... i heard ur chorus and most of ur lines and understood em, so that wasnt a problem for me, but u might wanna improve ur quality with the level of ur vocals and makin sure u dont mumble............ besides that it was better then 70% of the people rappin on this site.......

this wasn't that bad,it was actually pretty good, but i agree with^^^about the production quality, your flow is good, but your voice needs to be heard more, but is a nice intro, just clear it up..............pc