Paranoid vs Jay 3rd
 

Battle Rules:

1:00-2:00 (its alright if you go a bit over 2)
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

1 week to check in and 1 day to drop after check in.

all i ask is yall be honest with votes, and make sure their well explained.

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 04-20-07 at 01:28 AM

Must drop verse in 1600 minutes after check in.

Paranoid has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-13-07 03:56 PM.

www.soundclick.com/paranoidcan

"vs. Jay 3rd"

Lyrics:
Ayyo fucka Jay 3rd I'm leavin em crushed
I'm feedin em mush, cause he's dazed like a shroom
Phased by my tune, you get places in third
Cause first was me, and second is the verse
Jay's a greeser, except he can't gas it up
I crash a nut that can't pop the beaver
I'm so fast you couldn't stop my cheater
Examine me tight, cause you aint close to fame
Who chose to name you bronze on a mic?
My Jawn so tight, you look wrong dispite
The uglyness that people see in ya face
I think you haste and besides the race
I'm leavin you rocked cause I could hit a g
Spit a free? but this is from the dome
You never collabed? no wonder you alone
So play fetch my dog and go get the bone
You aint no pimp you get played wit ease
Like the next Buffy, you'se slayed for greed
Your amature, thats why you always battle noobs?
I cattle dudes that choose to beef witta cow
Your first L, Me, and your last win who?
Cause kids like you always end up in'a zoo
The circus is proud and the purpose is out
I think Sherlock holmes came to investigate
So I estimate whether his fraction is wrong
No action to long, he can't ration a song
I'm blastin it strong, but this dudes really weak
Like a silly geek he's gamin, (cause hes a nerd)
Hes really a poser, talkin; but it's all pretend
And when he goes datin, he only see's men
I'm so annoyed, he musta made me paranoid.
Cause yo jay 3rd's only buff when he pops steroids

Jay 3rd has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-14-07 08:05 PM.

please dont no show man, I already dropped my verse.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=5237045

scroll down for the lyrics on SC for those who like to read wit it.. this was filtered real quick.. ima be busy for a lil while so had to get it now.. otherwise i wouldnt of made it.. so here ya go..

you had some pretty nice lines dude, some pretty nice personals man, too bad i aint know much about you but thats coo. who the fuck is paydro lol?

Voted For: Jay 3rd

Para - Qualitys sounding ok on the intro, beats sounding cool. Proberly the best ive heard you rap, havent heard any of your shit for a while, you have adecent attempt at punches, coulda come with some better wordplay, "he's a nerd" you can tell you punched after that, we all punch from time to time, but I think the transition coulda been a bit smoother on it. Nothing personal in it, ( in saying that i aint no shit about the kid so I might a missed a little somthing) you have some ok multis in this, over all its a cool verse. Yet to play other kids so i wont say shit on a comparism level just yet.


jay 3rd - Lol @ the manson style.
Emotion and mic presence is cool, rapping on a confident level, flows ok, biut off in spots but not nothing too noticable. Your punches are ok, only a few signifigant through out the entire thing, production and qualitys cool man, dubs and Libs are nice. Could do with some better breath control but you made it work. Outro is ok, um, talking about nick pedro in a battle against someone else?! ok.


and dawg dont fake it your a virgin just face it
should be a baseball coach how u never touched bases
VS
Phased by my tune, you get places in third
Cause first was me, and second is the verse


Overall: Para you dropped decent bro, but nothing you said hit hard, your emotion behind the joint wasnt there, you just didnt sound like you were "in" the battle, it sounding like you were doing it for the sake of doing it.
Jay 3rd, you diodnt exactly drop solid, but you came with a few more solid punches, emotion was in it. I feel you just scrapped through on this one.

^wow you have the nerves to do that. Yea okay I thought my delivery was good, I thought thats what I had a edge on compared to Jay 3rd. but he def got me wit his lyrics, and Tzar your lines that you favour by me wow I thought I had better wordplay then that. P.S your a dick that cant rap shit.

lol @ you having a cry over a RV vote against you, grow the fuck up son, you lost, watch the other votes pan out and everyone will agree.

fucking fuck!! whats RV coming to when even the so called audio heads have a cry over a honest vote against them. Bitch!!

lol stfu i know the vote is fine wit me, its just what you said offended me cause it's like you know about delivery cause you have none.

Your forgetting one huge thing, end a the day YOU cant rap.

lol nuff of the back and forth arguen.. yea Tzar i could of came better .. this was really rushed for me... i just have work .. and my cars fuckin up on me so i gotta wok on that .. so this week is packed for me so i was like fuck it might as well drop now...
and nick pedro is NJP (carsonjet) was just talkin to him and didnt like his view of life and how he thinks of people.. so i was like blah i have a few seconds left might as well use it.. he's only worth a filler haha..
thanx for the honest tzar appreciate it.. will be more solid on the next battle p'z

and paranoid all u do is have to look at threads i start and reply in and u can find out a lot about someone... i just peeped the thread from kaughn and saw u said " well my dad give me all my money" and just used that and u bein under 18... lol not hard to do thats why i did it quick....
and damn i didnt really listen to mine much till now... u can realy hear ythe echo in my place.. damn i hate tile man..

This was feedback posted for Paranoid
 

Jay 3rd - You had delivery that's it really...you kept it energetic..flow was forced..and lyrics were whack..nothing great in there shit sound rushed anyway

Para - Lyrics were meh, whack most of the time too had one or two nice ones..flow was more smoother, a lil monotone he beat u on delivery..that easy shit was so out of place lol the closer was weak..but iuno both y'all didn't rlly come at it yo

Tbh this battle was pretty whack..

so this jus feedback i can't choose

lol once again wit the " too wack to vote" dawg just pick one.. if u scroll up i already said it was rushed and explains why... if its wack its wack just vote man.. cuz then all u gotta do if vote on the weaker one.. same as a normal battle just both is weak lol..
need to make a rule on people not voten man.. vote then say ya piece cuz this is gettin dumb.. if my other 4 battles are wack then Damn what is it gonna make the 5th..c'mon now..
and i actually think it came out nice compard to the others, especially for bein rushed.. but its whatever..

he doesnt wanna vote cause he thinks ima get mad at em probably, I dont care though. I'm not that great of a battler. I'm gonna work on my punches though.

is that a freindly way for you to tell yourself your wack? :)

Voted For: Jay 3rd

Lyrics:3rd
Beat:3rd....that beat was a dopeness shit...
Quality:Paranoid
Flow:3rd
Overal: 3rd

3rd brought it this time.....he had a better battle verus hands down....

Paraonid:...i didn't like the way you switched up ya rhymes...they were bad bro.....but your quality is fucking amazing...

lol in a way.. i think i'm decent thats it and i kno i deserve some kinda props besides its too wack to vote

^nah your decent brother, Its shit talking paranoid thats wack.

Tzar i'd merk you, you know that so stfu. That topical battle is pathetic, I could did better and I could merk you with a freestyle for fuck shakes. but yo Jay that dude hardly explained his vote, I'm coo wit it though.

how didn't i? stop bitching bro...

i voted the same way for you in another battle n i didn't see you whinin..

homie stop gasin ya self jay, both ya'lls shit was whack to me, I couldn't pick cos why wud I bother with something I ain't feelin the shit was a waste of time to listen to

This was feedback posted for Paranoid
 

polls.............................................

^now this guy always does that, almost like freepostin.

GSS can do whatever he wants, especially when fags like you dont accept battles. -_-

uppin............................................. ...................

This was feedback posted for Paranoid
 

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This was feedback posted for Paranoid
 

I crash a nut that can't pop the beaver
I'm so fast you couldn't stop my cheater

didn't make sense at all^^

Examine me tight, cause you aint close to fame
Who chose to name you bronze on a mic?
My Jawn so tight, you look wrong dispite
The uglyness that people see in ya face
I think you haste and besides the race

none of this makes any sense either ^^^..i think you haste? wow...my jawn so tight?....wow..

I'm leavin you rocked cause I could hit a g
Spit a free? but this is from the dome

a free is from the dome..this line is fucking stupid pointless filler that means nothing and does nothing to your opponent...

You never collabed? no wonder you alone
So play fetch my dog and go get the bone

this doesn't make sense...a dog can't play fetch alone...

You aint no pimp you get played wit ease
Like the next Buffy, you'se slayed for greed
Your amature, thats why you always battle noobs?
I cattle dudes that choose to beef witta cow

did you really bring up buffy in your diss? hahaha..fucking gay dude......you also used the word noobs in a rap...thats almost just as bad as buffy

i cattle dudes? cattle is not a fucking verb douchebag....please use a dictionary before you use, even the smallest and most simple of words...

Your first L, Me, and your last win who?
Cause kids like you always end up in'a zoo

okay...this is so un-effective it's rediculous...his first L...would mean he's never lost before....if he hasn't beaten anyone either...that means he's never battled before you...if thats what you were trying to say.....well...that just makes you a straight up liar....and what do you mean...Cause kids like you always end up in a zoo....what does that have to do with ANYTHING whatso EVER?

The circus is proud and the purpose is out
I think Sherlock holmes came to investigate
So I estimate whether his fraction is wrong
No action to long, he can't ration a song
I'm blastin it strong, but this dudes really weak
Like a silly geek he's gamin, (cause hes a nerd)
Hes really a poser, talkin; but it's all pretend
And when he goes datin, he only see's men
I'm so annoyed, he musta made me paranoid.
Cause yo jay 3rd's only buff when he pops steroids

only buff when he pops steroids? unless you have evidence that he juices....this is fucking worthless...it's called PERSONALS queer...

your shit is so blatantly bad and horribly played out....it's insane how awful you are. I honestly think you might be mentally handicapped.....because You have so much trouble putting together concise sentences, or sentences that even make sense for that matter. Your attempt at metaphors fail miserably every time...you never have wordplay....you never have any personals...just a bunch of punchlines that, unlike some people...who just used played out lines....yours were never even decent to begin with......You have honestly raised the bar for how bad a self proclaimed writer...or rap artist..or whatever...can actually be.

I will say this, your audio quality has gotten a lot better....vocals...flow..delivery...alll that.....but that doesn't mean shit....because your lyrics are straight garbage...i would honestly reccomend hiring a ghost writer.

This was feedback posted for Jay 3rd
 

i click on your link and it says theres no such song?

This was feedback posted for Jay 3rd
 

Yo it says no such song when I click on your link Jay???

how come nobody has closed this yet, wow. just give him the win, he obviously beat me i sucked balls back then.