I'm The King Of Punch lines #2
I'm The King Of Punch lines #2
Even as a carpenter you couldn’t hammer the grammar Or nail the flavor with stale behavior just a sad mamma jamma Your use of words is abuse to herds of readers can’t speak or write Too weak to fight saw you on the street last night living in fright You not thug just a slop scrub say what wanna a girl in the hot tub? Not aware of details never share females you be bent in events in clubs Look kid you need chrome hummers to get phone numbers And love letters from ladies and some Mercedes just a cucumber Won’t root her garden You rhyme dreary even with Einstein theory wouldn’t be atomic With Ebonics so ironic how your formula not supersonic Like Walter Payton you falter creating lyrics sipping gin and tonic Putting legit restrictions on your bits of fictions rhymes sound chronic You try hustles with bad eye muscles you don’t see straight And never be great so why debate like a whack candidate? Don’t accept bribes but you need help with scribes don’t hate |
?? where da punchlines at dogg...lmaooo i aint see nun
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^^lol where are the punches man lol you suck bad haha thinks hes the best at punches you cant say that triple N is and then im Mr. PunchLines ill hurt you man yu got nun on me and youve been in this site for longer then me aha and im 14 haha
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HA! HA! HA! yall cats listen up and read this is a punchline
You rhyme dreary even with Einstein theory wouldn’t be atomic With Ebonics so ironic how your formula not supersonic Like Walter Payton you falter creating lyrics sipping gin and tonic Putting legit restrictions on your bits of fictions your rhymes sound chronic |
um not realy a punchline is when yer dissingf someone buddy like this:
madraper is crap he says he spits punchlines/ but aint got time to even shine and spit his lines/. and plus that just sucked so bad what i wrote but its better then yer song lol |
BrOTheRP.A.R.A. you contradicting yourself hell I'm dissing the fuck out of somebody but my vocab is years ahead of that simple diss you wrote
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om buddy you might be older then me but trust me i can out battle you dont start shit i could merk you plus i dont want no beef i was just making a state ment
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BrOTheRP.A.R.A. well make sense don't look fake and dense trying make yourself look big man get some vocab please
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honestly neither one of yous can drop punchlines for one i didnt see any in this lil "flow" and HOEtheRPA or what ever he fucking is you cant even rap so dont even lidten to him madd rapper.....yall wanna read a punchline......here
im gonna drop something and ill show you punchlines iight make sure you read it you can thate all you want but im gonna show the real punchlines iight fellas |
fuck punch lines, im too drunk to drop lines, so when i rap im heard, drunk on stage perved, and fuck structure, im dumb enough to jus cut cha,
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Punchlines? Thats All I Got To Say Peeps Fresh Ya Boy
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stuff be hitting on four corners thanks for the props and critique
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work on ya punches.....
come more creative and witty with them N make ya following bar more hard hitting.... some basic lines some more decent then others..... but keep praticesing.... give me feed back on my drop... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144597 |
thanks fo rthe props and critique
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