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Heavyweight Championship: Sdizzle .vs. God
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hes always first to lose, and the last one to finish
kids a one man crew... and even hes not wanted in it and i can see why..... not only is his future dark i couldn't tell he existed.. till i seen where his eyes start man uv always been wack, its not that hard to see kids a herb on real sites.... but a fucking god on rv u be buggin me all the time, u need to mind ur business and god the king of the wack.. ...& this rulers still short a couple inches ur names wack..u aint gansta, so lets toss out the g and the kid wouldn't come dope even with the o.d  |
Czech it...
RV's heads just ain't seein' you, kid, you have no place on the sight And if I wanted to see old jokes, son, I'd just tune in to Nick at Nite So I'll just leave dizzle lying dead here, but ain't this shit the truth? His roots originate from RB.... & his God punches are from there too God's a pro at takin' hits, 'cept ur con-cept's were already swung, b I'd accuse ya of biting personals, but I know ur ass was just hungry Our User Titles are equal, but see, in text or life we're not a match Cause while God is on a fuckin' roll... sdizzle's just fuckin' rolls of fat So I guess the only way to settle this is split the title, with no hate Cuz my bars may hit Heavy, but damn, dizzle wins with the Weight! Later And no, I'm not gonna bother doin' something played and wack like postin' up your picture to get an extra edge here... But whateva floats your boat, dizzle! Just be careful not to sink it. :) |
Vote: God
the kid fucked up dizzle to the days: So I'll just leave dizzle lying dead here, but ain't this shit the truth? His roots originate from RB.... & his God punches are from there too ^^^lmao Our User Titles are equal, but see, in text or life we're not a match Cause while God is on a fuckin' roll... sdizzle's just fuckin' rolls of fat So I guess the only way to settle this is split the title, with no hate Cuz my bars may hit Heavy, but damn, dizzle wins with the Weight! ^^^^rofl!!! So yeah, he also had the better structures while dizzle screws up that bit dizzle had some nice punches, but didn't hit as hard as god's: hes always first to lose, and the last one to finish kids a one man crew... and even hes not wanted in it ^^^^decent dizzle also has some really played punches, subtitle, wack punches: ur names wack..u aint gansta, so lets toss out the g and the kid wouldn't come dope even with the o.d ^^^^gee....are you serious? |
sdizzle:
hes always first to lose, and the last one to finish kids a one man crew... and even hes not wanted in it ^^damn just e-dope 9/10 and i can see why..... not only is his future dark i couldn't tell he existed.. till i seen where his eyes start ^^wack 3/10 man uv always been wack, its not that hard to see kids a herb on real sites.... but a fucking god on rv ^^good meta 6/10 u be buggin me all the time, u need to mind ur business and god the king of the wack.. ...& this rulers still short a couple inches ^^good meta kinda weak punch 5/10 ur names wack..u aint gansta, so lets toss out the g and the kid wouldn't come dope even with the o.d ^^ played concept but still good 7/10 overall : 30/50 (60%) God: RV's heads just ain't seein' you, kid, you have no place on the sight And if I wanted to see old jokes, son, I'd just tune in to Nick at Nite ^^dope opener feeling this 8/10 So I'll just leave dizzle lying dead here, but ain't this shit the truth? His roots originate from RB.... & his God punches are from there too ^^lmao hot maybe best bar of battle 9/10 God's a pro at takin' hits, 'cept ur con-cept's were already swung, b I'd accuse ya of biting personals, but I know ur ass was just hungry ^^lmfao ok now this is the best bar of the battle 10/10 Our User Titles are equal, but see, in text or life we're not a match Cause while God is on a fuckin' roll... sdizzle's just fuckin' rolls of fat ^^dam just stop sick bar 8/10 So I guess the only way to settle this is split the title, with no hate Cuz my bars may hit Heavy, but damn, dizzle wins with the Weight! ^^good meta good punch 7/10 overall : 42/50 (84%) v: god this is probably the best verse i have seen in KLL good verses |
i actually thought this was a close one...
but i think God got the edge here with a lil more wit and more decent lines than dizzle... V/ God... |
Sdizzle:
hes always first to lose, and the last one to finish kids a one man crew... and even hes not wanted in it not a bad opener. and i can see why..... not only is his future dark i couldn't tell he existed.. till i seen where his eyes start seen=saw, dialogue check. man uv always been wack, its not that hard to see kids a herb on real sites.... but a fucking god on rv what? u be buggin me all the time, u need to mind ur business and god the king of the wack.. ...& this rulers still short a couple inches eh okay. a bit jumbly. ur names wack..u aint gansta, so lets toss out the g and the kid wouldn't come dope even with the o.d punch was there, but worded all wrong. *gave great effort, ya spent some time on punches, needed better personals. ya wordplay was lacking and there were a few parts ya lines didnt make sense (dialogue/tone). dont sweat it, overall decent read. God: RV's heads just ain't seein' you, kid, you have no place on the sight And if I wanted to see old jokes, son, I'd just tune in to Nick at Nite [b]good set up. good punch. vocab? So I'll just leave dizzle lying dead here, but ain't this shit the truth? His roots originate from RB.... & his God punches are from there too nice. God's a pro at takin' hits, 'cept ur con-cept's were already swung, b I'd accuse ya of biting personals, but I know ur ass was just hungry lol. decent set up. Our User Titles are equal, but see, in text or life we're not a match Cause while God is on a fuckin' roll... sdizzle's just fuckin' rolls of fat lol. good comedy. So I guess the only way to settle this is split the title, with no hate Cuz my bars may hit Heavy, but damn, dizzle wins with the Weight! lmao. nice closure. *personals and punches were good, wordplay and structure were decent. no vocab. ya still win. good read. vote: God |
nice battle god
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ill see u in a week, still number one with the points, so ill be in the contenderhsip match next week.. hope ur still here when i return
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yeah.. god got this.. well done both of you..
v/god.. some good flips on old concepts took this for him. |
Yeah......God just came more consistant in this one, dizzle had a few blah lines so naturally, God took this one :thumbup:
Vote - God |
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Yeah, no doubt, good battle. And I don't plan on goin' anywhere for a while... LOL... See ya there, dizzle. |
I thought it was a tie but since God used the fat-sdizzle punches i gotta give it to dizz. seriously, i dont likey the fat punches no more, i dunno if all of dizzles shit was understood but he got some damn good creativity, except for the RV punches which he seems to use every verse here.
v:sdizzle if i may :) |
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