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genocide (MidWest) VS Abstrakt (East Coast)
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Battles will open Thursday 2 AM Eastern Time Check in by Saturday 12 AM Eastern Time Verses due in by Monday 2 AM Eastern Time All votes should due in by Wednesday 2AM Eastern Time Rules: No dick riding No crew votes No biting No recycling No freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd No feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 10-15 bar(20-30 Lines) If Check Ins Are In Then You Will Be Given A topic To Write About... Good Luck! |
Aight yo, first round topic for ... genocide and ... Abstrakt is going to be
"There are to many options in the world!" 10-15 bars on this topic, good luck both of you! |
yo we already agreed on a
topic: Insects Everywhere so were doing that one Check in |
droping later today alright Abstrakt
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An insect to society I woke up one morning,
I lay awake in my bed wondering why being different was on the wing I was borderline of societies worst, I was of no use to the world I flipped on the news, “Another man mysteriously murdered”... my head twirled. I littered and I spat on the ground with distaste I was late for my job, and quickly made haste Than I thought to my self “fuck it, it’s over” I have nothing to live for If I’m living to die my fate is my own, I felt like I prisoner of war Trapped, with no route to escape, I worked hard and never was late I went to school for 12 years and I never made a mistake But now I realised if I’m leaving soon than I might as well make well of my time Instantly I revolutionized my way of thinking Just to keep my low spirits from constantly sinking Like a boat my mind just seems to be drifting… Where do they take me, into these places unknown… What goes down that windy, long dark road….? As I pick my self from my dreams I notice a mosquito sucking blood from my veins.. It reminded me of myself, no help to no-one… Nothing in my life worthy of being done.. I wonder am I, that insect everywhere? To Society? And thay are really everywhere First round i agrre, the topics are wack, BUT, IF YOU GO A HEAD AND BATTLE WITH A TOPIC NOT A PROVED BY ME OR PLUTONIUM YOU WILL BE REMOVED FROM THIS TOURNAMENT! First and only :Warning |
Whoooooooooa...
Better Check With Officials Before You Just Go And Switch Shit Like That... Plut, Tell Me Whats Up So I Dont Waste Any Lines Or Get DQ'ed... .One. |
"Insects Everywhere"
*I've Got Some Problems* God, This Drug Is What Lifts But Plagues Us.... Amunst In Enough Of This Haze To Phaze Skunks... They Borderline Beat Us, Thats Why I Reach For Max Highs... Cashed Pipes And Coke Lines Refine Sore Past Times... Looking For More Outa Life Then Bors... Nife Looks More Like A Nice Bite Until I Light Then Soar... *I Need More Then Weed To Get Me Through This Shit* Immunity To Used To These, Need New Views To See... Want More Lift, Boost, Optortunity To Get Loose With Ease... Mind Made Up Indeed When I See My Buds I'm Saved... Times Up, I'ma See If New Lines Give What I've Craved... *Waiting For The Delivery* I Want New Mind Fogs And Root Times Gone... Hide Along A Blind Song Played In Tune By Pipe Bongs... Hear Knocks, Stear Off To The Door To Pear Off... Fear Pops Up But Nods Off As I See Threw, Dear Aunt... Let Her In As A Zip Lock Guess Purse Lets Curiosity Spin... There Were Pills Dropped Along Her And I More Odly Wince... *Im Hyped To Try This Shit* Give Me Back It, I Stop Thinking And Took Without Askin... Feel The Back Hit The Top Of My Palet And Grasp It... Go To The Faucet And Tap It To Wash Down The Acid... Sit Back In My Chair Coughin As The Grownd Collapses... See An Ant Out Of The Corner Of My Eye... Wach Each Leg Slow Motion Forward And Rub Right By... Each Tiny Step Let Out Echos, Hit The Walls And Rebounds... Cover My Ears Cuz The Sounds Are To Loud To Keep Out... *What The Hell Is Going On?!!?* Somewhat Fearful, I Cant Stop Looking At The Ants Near Pull... Breaking Peace, Every Ear Full Get My Heart Near Free-flow... Suddenly See Them Coming, The Woodwork Bubbling... Ants Running As They Smother My Mouth, Im Mumbling... Reality Crumbling As Whats Real To Me Is Nothing... ATTACKING ME!!! ALL OVER I CANT BREATH!!! SKIN FALLS AND BLOODS RUSHING!!!... *Hyperventalation...Fainted* |
genocide*aight ya pice was aight, but i felt did'nt have great content...
vocab was ok, couldve been better,structure was decent..your opening couple of bars were good i thought but your closer absolutely sucked..srry man but i mean thats the strongest part of a topical n yours didnt do nothin 4 me.... . ab*flow was a bit off in places but i really picked up later on, that was really good, i was a bit lost on where you were going with ya interpretation of the topic but after i finished i laughed...it was funny, good vocab,good inner rhymin n some multi's.... . overall im going with ab* to me it was an easy choice, cuz i felt ab's left ya with a story while gen's did'nt take ya nowhere, it jus mainly ended where it left off... . VOTE/AB |
Thanks Mayn...
Upping For More Votes... .One. |
ya thanks and i thinlk that abstrakt won this he is a lot better then me at topicals and stuff then me
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I will leave it up to you wether this is left open for votes or if you dont mind closing it.
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dont matter to me ill take the lose to an experinced vet like Abstrakt
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