"Yeah Yeah"
 

Yeah, this the track you gonna uppercut your grandmother to. Shit's MEGA high energy! AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH


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The sample on the beat was a little much, took away from the track a little bit
I would've made that sample a lil lower cause it conflicted with the verses


1st verse, didn't like your delivery to much
had a couple nice lines though

2nd Verse, was feeling the delivery on this verse
it matched up better, good verse

3rd Verse, felt the delivery on this verse too
did your thing on this verse too

Good emotions though, beat was nice, just was a little thrown by that "Yeah" sample
got a nice flow too


good shit




-Storm

Good looks.

i liked the beat...wut is it?.....first dude quality is nice flows gud ....lyrics was coo
2nd dude was nice aswell nice delivery...third dude was cool......i think i liked the 2nd dude the best tho...overall pretty nice track word

^^thanks fam. As for the beat, I forgot where the hell I got it. sollee. But with that said, Uppining.

this shit is pretty nice, beats hyped, i think yall did an o.k job w/ the adlibs in the hook, but could use more, i was feelin first cat, which sound like dooms if Im not mistaken, your voice overpowers my shitty comp speakers, but you probly had the most energy out of anyone on the track, good flow- second was so-so to me, nothin really standout compared to the other two, but the third cat was fire fire, flow was real entertaining- i like hearin cats play w/ the beat like he did first couple bars, take the brains line had me laughin, real impressive, keep droppin...1

lol thanks for the feedback. The third verse was actually pretty-much off the dome. He sat down for a sec an thought-out what he wanted to say, then spit it and got it on the second take. done deal. in and out with that track in about 6 minutes. The Rush man. we doin it!


Uppin for the you-know-what.

i dont like beat, vocal sample doesnt sound and is too repetitive... delivery on first verse doesnt fit beat, flows cool.. lyrics nuttin special.. second verse delivery fits alot better.. y does this sound like somebody completely different spitting to the first verse???? this sounds like a collab and you aint put props for ppl featuring on it... 3rd fits same as second.. lyrically none of them were amasing, eh track was ok

That's because it IS two different people on it. Actually 3. The whole thing is a collab. Thought that woulda been easy to get just by hearing the different voices and everyone saying a their respective names. But yeah, your feedback is predictable as usual. Thanks anyways.

CHEA!! To the roof out this bitch.

well when i read the post etc it basically looked like a solo joint, thats what i was expecting, so it just baffled me when different voices started coming in.

but im sorry if i found all your rhyme schemes basic and lyrics predictable and the fact the beat is boring and basic as hell and not very well produced..... your styles are just the same as every american head out there.

..yeah. Welp, since I'm american..of course ANYTHING I do will seem "american". But yeah, liek I said man, thanks for the feed.

its not the fact it seems american, its the fact its like every other american making music, i dont hear no originality behind it man thats all im meaning, i wasnt tryna say you should make it british or australian or canadian or whatever, just find something in your style that you can do to add suttin no1 else is doing