David Lama vs KempoMRK
 

Battle Rules:

10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Key this quick, less than 10 minutes

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-30-05 at 09:07 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

KempoMRK has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-27-05 10:07 AM.

David Lama has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-27-05 10:08 AM.

Dude's a huge geek, the net is his life and the rest is a pawn,
Cos if I told him to go Home he'd instinctively press the button,
Won't take much to rip ya, and take you other like any other fool,
I'll Haul you so easy you'd think you were on a boat AND at school,
You shark and steal and think it'll cause plenty of mass drama,
As first you rip off a Muslim god and now the Dalai Fucking Lama!?
You don't understand this place where I've studied it, ya,
Cos you're whacker at RV than all rookie campers are,
My lines'll give you mad rushes, enough to do you harm,
But don't get your dick out yet man...I ain't Napalm!

lets be honest dude, you could say u been rarely sick
k, em’s alot better than me.. but you ain’t slim shady bitch
You like me alot?, what you doing it claiming that???
You’ve never been a hot topic…. but your still a flaming fag
Just stay in school , look how ya slay spellings dude
‘N O, K ain’t describing ya skills, its what girls stay telling you
I warned you about this, don’t act like ya lost the card kid
but if you’re special K, they taking the cereal off the market
I’m a cool killer.. Let ya smoke.. Then u’ll die high
I need help for a drive bye, while You can’t help but drive Bi

You like me alot?, what you doing it claiming that???

ignore the IT

lets be honest dude, you could say u been rarely sick
k, em’s alot better than me.. but you ain’t slim shady bitch
Just stay in school , look how ya slay spellings dude
‘N O, K ain’t describing ya skills, its what girls stay telling you
So Im’a Drive off and dump ya body with a load
you don’t need to pack up….but your still gonna hit the road
I warned you about this, don’t act like ya lost the card kid
but if you’re special K, they taking the cereal off the market
I’m a cool killer.. Let ya smoke.. Then u’ll die high
I need help for a drive bye, while You can’t help but drive Bi

thats all I need..

damn I posted my verse twice by accident..

can a mod delete one of them???

anyways g/l kem and vote up people.

Upping. If you vote drop a link and we'll both hit it up for sure.

Voted For: KempoMRK

David lama

Felt ur verse wuz pretty weak.Ur flow wuz nothing special.Had some played shit.Like..Special K/cereal shit is bassically played out nowadays.Some lines were pretty dumb.Like the slim shady one you used as an opener.I see it was an attempted nameplay...but it didn't work much.Ur closer was prolly the only decent line..but even that wuz worded poorly.

KempoMRK

Ok...your flow,like David,was nothing special.Ur opener didn't rhyme too.Some of your lines just seemed stupid to me.Only decent lines were the last 2..wit the campers and napalm shit.Mainly cause they were the only ones to make some sense.

So..I got to give it Kempo.

vote-Kempo
Rtf in one of the battles in my sig.

Ooh...Kempo,I just realized you only have 100 posts,so you wouldn't be able to vote in any of the battles in my sig.

so hit this battle up instead
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212948

Upping. I came on the next day to vote Natural and it was already over.

Drop links and me and lama will vote on them.

Voted For: David Lama

lets be honest dude, you could say u been rarely sick
k, em’s alot better than me.. but you ain’t slim shady bitch
Meh..
Just stay in school , look how ya slay spellings dude
‘N O, K ain’t describing ya skills, its what girls stay telling you
Coo punch..
So Im’a Drive off and dump ya body with a load
you don’t need to pack up….but your still gonna hit the road
An okay line..
I warned you about this, don’t act like ya lost the card kid
but if you’re special K, they taking the cereal off the market
Aight..
I’m a cool killer.. Let ya smoke.. Then u’ll die high
I need help for a drive bye, while You can’t help but drive Bi
Okay..


Dude's a huge geek, the net is his life and the rest is a pawn,
Cos if I told him to go Home he'd instinctively press the button,
Nerp..
Won't take much to rip ya, and take you other like any other fool,
I'll Haul you so easy you'd think you were on a boat AND at school,
Meh..
You shark and steal and think it'll cause plenty of mass drama,
As first you rip off a Muslim god and now the Dalai Fucking Lama!?
Aight..
You don't understand this place where I've studied it, ya,
Cos you're whacker at RV than all rookie campers are,
Nerp..
My lines'll give you mad rushes, enough to do you harm,
But don't get your dick out yet man...I ain't Napalm!
Coo..


Meh at this battle.. both came a little weak in this shit. Kempo, your verse was aight. Had a couple of punches there were okay, but mostly weak though. Could’ve came harder than that. Lama, you came a little weak also, punches were there, but not as hard as ya other battle against Souljah, but you barely took this one in my view.

W00T.. uppin this shiznit.

This was feedback posted for David Lama
 

What site you from?
Good ass verse......................