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-Cezar- vs. Sin`cere
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g'luck... |
yea check....
ur goin to need it....lol......and drop on time too.... |
We get hearing problems by ya style,its your voice we cant stand
Might aswell be Russel Simmons,From the way you make Def Jams blah...bored so i key'd mine up now |
Ya punches aint hitting, yea im right even if ya tried o hit me wit a left
Cuz mine is like knives that killed J(u)lius -Cezar- so now ull be Seeing Death EXPLANATIONS..... Ok right like im right and at the same time talking bout directions "left" and Cezar, J(u)lius that i killed him with knives....julius cesar died from being knifed....and seeing death is his OM in his sig....kinda of a good explanation....lol.... |
i dont see why you had to explain it...pretty simple
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V/Cezar.............. for having the better bar...
Ps. You dont need to explain 2 lines with 4 lines. |
We get hearing problems by ya style,its your voice we cant stand
Might aswell be Russel Simmons,From the way you make Def Jams ^^man saying his jams are deaf ain't really a punch, also jams doesn't rhyme well with stand Ya punches aint hitting, yea im right even if ya tried o hit me wit a left Cuz mine is like knives that killed J(u)lius -Cezar- so now ull be Seeing Death ^^this is a much better concept, poorly executed, don't just throw wordplay in like the left right stuff for the hell of it, make it work, make it funny/witty, make it have a point v/Sin'cere |
v/ sincere
slightly better, even though the explanation almost killed it cezar def jam lines arent effective in PL battles |
V/ - Cezar
both bars were pretty much as weak as each other..... but then Sin`Cere explained his, so it made it wacker |
v/ sin`cere...dat def jam shit was super wack lol
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Pretty close...but honestly...I gotta give it to cezar
His one seemed to hit more as a punch. Sin 'cere was too technical......try to avoid explainin ya shit too.. V/Cezar |
^^^Ooh shit....I forgot i was still logged on that account..
it's me...just to let you know... |
hotshh! n marvjay are'nt in the league?...so there vote cant count
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ohhh they arent????..... Quote:
aint this swaying????...ok then....Either count them or DQ....i think...if mimesis think so...cuz i do think this is swaying???? |
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