..Syck.. vs. Bruise Banner
 

Here's the rules........
10 lines...
3-0 is a KO...
No d/r votes...
No hate votes...
No biting..... etc
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Check........

after this battle, Battle banter owes me a battle.

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Keeeeeeeeeeeey..



yo this cat sucks.. in fact, he probly dont rap much
so i'll have him C-D-L.. like he was driving a Mac truck
dont gotta try for this wack fuck.. the dude is played
plus he wont be here long.. cuz we know Bruises fade
hes got a flow with no punches.. u see his shit plummet
so i'll shove my..
words down ya throat, to make u 'Syck to ya stomach'
no way to beat Syck, u can try but son thats weak shit
we could talk wit skillz but you'd have, none to speak wit
see ya speechless & its no wonder, ya just badly repped
so now this kid just felt a loss.. like he had a family death

*CDL- truck driver's liscense

Ahhheemmm........

Leave and never come back...and I say this with sincerity....
Yer' wack... actually being 'syck' would just be a parody...
Apparently you think you can battle...which is kinda' insulting....
cause the only time you drop bars...is when yer' polevaulting...
Simular to butterknifes...your spit's pointless and wont cut it'
just like your Rap Battles career started ... it will end that sudden'
No girth... your worth is measured on micrometers...
Drops not even hot enough... to register on thermometers....
Yer' right you are syck.... but only because I cant stomach you...
Consider me the Big Brother program... cause ya just got sonned' fool
Blah...........kinnda weak......oh well............

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good battle for 2 newb's.....
Syck.. ur verse was ok....needs a lota work tho...punches came week...and there was no flow realy.....no personals...and structure....USE personals coz they win battles bro...aaiiigght...overall 5/10
Bruise Banter...ur verse was cool 4 a newb....dat line bout pollvoltin was good....punches were ok,some week....flow very basic...and not realy much structure,once again no personals......overall:6.5/10(not bad)...keep it up both of u.
v/Bruise Banter(beta alround)

are you kidding.. read what you just said.. i had a punch and personal in just about every bar IDIOT.. i hate newbies

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this is rediculous.. and i voted on like 5-6 battles........... *sigh* up for vottttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeeessssssssssssss

Bruise took this.

Had the wordplay edge.

And the originality/creativity.

But Syck wasn't bad at all, man.

Real impressive.

Great wordplay and punch on the "mac truck" line.
Real nice personal on his name ("fade" line)...

But ya "shove down throat" line has been played over and over.
So's the "skill" one...
And the closer was weak.

Bruise had the better vocab, and spit shit I hadn't seen before.
(well, hadn't seen as often)

Just a bit better, Bruise.

Peace

am i missing something here............................... HELLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO someone who knows what a punch and personal is plz vote.. save me from a robbery

lol at born to kills vote.. hey word of advice syck if you want to battle on here dont bring anyskills to the table because people will vote against you

heres a real vote

syck- i liked your wordplay in this battle you came creative with your disses

"dont gotta try for this wack fuck.. the dude is played
plus he wont be here long.. cuz we know Bruises fade"

i liked that shit also "no way to beat Syck, u can try but son thats weak shit
we could talk wit skillz but you'd have, none to speak wit"

bruise banner- you came with elementary wordplay.. your verse didnt have any creative disses that i saw.. also you had some played out lines like this "cause the only time you drop bars...is when yer' polevaulting"

i felt like your disses were basic

vote- syck