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FameAss ((keystyle))
Whats it take to be famous? ummm nice beats, nice hooks
its even easier for the bitches, they just need nice looks Ill throw books & magazines then stick them fools in a crapper add cars, bitches and gunshots, and you got the makin of a rapper so batter up fools, as I pitch a punch aimed in your direction I watch a music video these days and all I get is an erection No vibe, no soul, just one goal and thats to make money Losin their roots on the way to the bank, how can they find that funny? I dont care that their wrist is Bright, Id rather hear a dope rhyme let em make their moms proud, thats the real definition of sunshine just one time i wanna hear a line with some deeper thoughts Instead of some dumb niggas boastin about losin money in court! where I'm from ya give to the poor, and stop bein so Greedy watch me lock these rappers in my bars and start feedin the needy it seems ya dont need talent, and everybodys gettin signed whats sad is even them whiteboys on mtv got the industry out rhymed |
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a bit simple but base on true stuff hip-hop is kinda dead and videos are base on sexy ass hoes in bikini suits but i aint complaing about them thou lol...
you def have potential pick it up a bit and get more creative or LIKE MY FAVORIT THING TO DO IS GO STRAIGHT RAW..... but not bad for your first drop.... |
ye i tried to be a little bit diffrent with my approach, not really sure it worked but ill be droppin all diffrent type of styles, so thanks for the feedback on my peice man
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this was nice i liked it ....it was different but i like to read different things.....keep writing...~1~
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