Lifted Keystyle.
 

Im jugglin teachins....and stay surrounded in greatness..
but still... struggle with demons that personify hatred...
it’s all matrix..some people wanna be higher than ghosts..
me?I’ll stay posted in the frozen citiy where fireflies glow..
inspired by soul, it’s a battle just to stay true to yourself...
people abusin themselves hidin behind booze and the stealth..
mirage placebo.....people believe they seein invincible...
all i see is a human..miserable...whos beings invisible...
it’s like..the bigger the man...the bigger the movement..
but a heart on the sleeve just means the quicker you lose it.
it’s stupid...what you want your thoughts locked in a safe?
untill the day it’s too late to saythe things you’d forgotten to say?
unless it’s a lesson in hand...ocean of thoughts and a blessing of sand..
it’s planned...to think escaping makes you less of a man...
and sometimes...the weed helps get my sanity even..
to stay high i smoke more when i feel gravity creepin’
seek meanin’...otherwise learn the rules of the bricks..
it’s seemin’..Your Gods a facade and truth is a myth..
but who’s to dismiss...all the places we’ve been...’
from the graves in the desert to the slaves in the pen’
embracin the wind...yall leaves just practicin greed..
to discover your roots you must get back to the tree..
infact it’s a need...just see the plans that are spoken..
so you can use the past to help you stand in the moment...

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nice flow, deep topic, i feel the story and some bars was above average and others didnt seem to go with this, good overal drop

Not bad not bad...its been awhile since i've seen someone display multies in such a manor then myself but then again i don't come here often pretty decent, you flow was above par, imagry so so but not basic just no to the point where your words had me visualize everything emotion was ok, structure some what on point props fo real.

Be sure to feed my piece after i drop it.

i read this piece for the first time the other day and was i blown away. yes, your a valued crhymie of mine, but still, i have to give props where props are due. i reread it and still, im utterly amazed by your work r. you are an excellent writer, but you dont need me to tell you that. your drop was deep, deep indeed. muties-great. vocab-great. flow-great. you stayed on topic. i cant find anything negative to say about it. great work fam.

*highlights the drop, copies it and takes it to another site to obtain all of r's glory.*

^^^lol. jp folks. r: making o.m. writers look bad since day one.

boost the crhyme rate.


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'inspired by soul'

I allways knew it. lol, this is a nice drop bro, good to see some talented writers dropping instead a the candy ass kids that post in Open mic. lol Theres some decent multis in this bro, and we all know how much I love a good multi. Overall this is a fucking solid peice.

inspired by soul, it’s a battle just to stay true to yourself...
people abusin themselves hidin behind booze and the stealth
that was a dope ass bar
overall it was a good drop real deep good word play,id like to hear you do an audio to that with a real mellow mysterious type beat..

That was some deep shit, bro. One of the few drops on RV to actually keep me readin' all the way through. Quite a few of you're lines stood out from the rest. As far as vocabulary, who gives a shit as long as you get your message out? and you did. But yeah, man. This was a great drop and you should post shit more often. Imagery was great too, reminds me of my style of writing kind of. Keep up the good work.

your wordchoice & vocab was pretty solid in this piece. I enjoyed the direction that you went as you composed this piece...

Overall, this drop was definitely better than most of the drops in Open Mics...