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14. Socrates Vs. 20. Premanition
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Battles open Friday Night At 11:59 PM Eastern Time Check-Ins Due By Sunday At 11:59 PM Eastern Time Verse's Due By Tuesday At 11:59 PM Eastern Time Voting Ends Thursday At 11:00 PM Eastern Time 12 Lines No Biting No Feeding No Recycling The Person With The Most Votes By The Deadline Wins If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney! Good Luck! |
boom chicka woom
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guess i'll have to beat two of the favourites in the first two rounds...lol
gud luck soc pz |
Damn, so this herbs signature says he can see the future coming
So shit, I wouldnt blame him for thinkin its bright after this sunning Punchline champ?You're MW and i'm HW, so you live in my shadow So everyone watch while I merk P harder then heads from rapbattles It's over son, you gunna have to take whether or not you hate it You win? Shit you couldnt even properly spell the word "favorite"! Plus it was always destiny for you to lose, its quite easy to see When even the leader of your crew admitted he lost a battle to me So why should you even try?Well I bet I know what you are craving I can bet my bottom dollar.....that its even more than ya life savings! Its done,over,abolished, either way you put it, ya just been smacked So Prem takes the cake.........cuz he damn sure aint takin this match Holla, drop early. |
Number 1 - favourite is how its spelt in english
Number 2 - I am & always have been leader of 'M.A.B' . . . . Soc ya like your sig, its easy to take an eye off you... Flow's prediction was off, realised, now he flied off too... Greedy?, Only here for the money but I’ll take this freebie… Not confident, you’d ‘bet’ on me but you’d get ‘Id’d’ G…(15) “seems A.I just takin too long”, or sampled a Socrates scripture…(*) Damn! Give u tracing paper and u still don’t ‘get the picture’… You’d av bin in the RV dreamteam but theres a veteran clause… Even if u ‘shit on my writtens’, they’d still be beta than yours… Lyricist Lounge? Fuckin freeposting, take down them feet… Dawg you never ‘boil over’ so its clear your easy to ‘beat’…(egg) U in the ‘shadows’, bitch set an appointment wiv the doctor… Socrates your done, ain’t nothin but a ‘phantom’ in this ‘opera’… . . . . . (*) - he sed that in his free agent thread . . . . Gud Luck soc |
i was thinking this would be the battle of the week...lets see
Soc first: Damn, so this herbs signature says he can see the future coming So shit, I wouldnt blame him for thinkin its bright after this sunning 8 haha, pretty decent, simple word play, decent concept Punchline champ?You're MW and i'm HW, so you live in my shadow So everyone watch while I merk P harder then heads from rapbattles 9 another good one, gay how you suck up in battles, but still a funny ass concept It's over son, you gunna have to take whether or not you hate it You win? Shit you couldnt even properly spell the word "favorite"! 7.5 blah, decent, i like it, just something about the wording to me Plus it was always destiny for you to lose, its quite easy to see When even the leader of your crew admitted he lost a battle to me 7 that was bad, leaders aren't always the best on a side note, but this was just such a simple punch that i didn't like it at all reallly So why should you even try?Well I bet I know what you are craving I can bet my bottom dollar.....that its even more than ya life savings! 6.5 wow that's played, and not even really a punch...you are better then this punch soc... Its done,over,abolished, either way you put it, ya just been smacked So Prem takes the cake.........cuz he damn sure aint takin this match 9 haha, that's a nice concept, i've heard an off shoot of this, but never worded this well, i liked this punch alot now Prems Breakdown Soc ya like your sig, its easy to take an eye off you... Flow's prediction was off, realised, now he flied off too... 8.5 haha, pretty decetn good stuff...so true...where's flow? haah Greedy?, Only here for the money but I’ll take this freebie… Not confident, you’d ‘bet’ on me but you’d get ‘Id’d’ G…(15) 7 blah at best...lalalallallal “seems A.I just takin too long”, or sampled a Socrates scripture…(*) Damn! Give u tracing paper and u still don’t ‘get the picture’… 8.5 haha, good concept, wording could have been better, but good stuff You’d av bin in the RV dreamteam but theres a veteran clause… Even if u ‘shit on my writtens’, they’d still be beta than yours… 7 wow, that wasn't really a good or a decent punch, the set up line could have been made into a better punch Lyricist Lounge? Fuckin freeposting, take down them feet… Dawg you never ‘boil over’ so its clear your easy to ‘beat’…(egg) 9.5 wholy shit son, fucking sick concept, nice wording also, good shit U in the ‘shadows’, bitch set an appointment wiv the doctor… Socrates your done, ain’t nothin but a ‘phantom’ in this ‘opera’… 8 well hmm the thing with that is that the phantom plays a big role in those operas, anyways, i know what you were trying to say and it is a farily decent punch, good shit Socrates=47 Premanition=48.5 VOTE Premanition good battle to both of you, I thought it was going to be a little bit better, but still good stuff... |
Damn, so this herbs signature says he can see the future coming
So shit, I wouldnt blame him for thinkin its bright after this sunning Punchline champ?You're MW and i'm HW, so you live in my shadow So everyone watch while I merk P harder then heads from rapbattles Its done,over,abolished, either way you put it, ya just been smacked So Prem takes the cake.........cuz he damn sure aint takin this match vs Soc ya like your sig, its easy to take an eye off you... Flow's prediction was off, realised, now he flied off too... “seems A.I just takin too long”, or sampled a Socrates scripture…(*) Damn! Give u tracing paper and u still don’t ‘get the picture’… Lyricist Lounge? Fuckin freeposting, take down them feet… Dawg you never ‘boil over’ so its clear your easy to ‘beat’…(egg) voter: Soc for better punches and overall verse sorry Prem SCHEMA WHEN YOU SEE THIS CHANGE MY POLL I ACCIDENTLY POLLED IT FOR PREM |
im back to vote on these battles... get this tourney over
socrates: Damn, so this herbs signature says he can see the future coming So shit, I wouldnt blame him for thinkin its bright after this sunning ^^wack 4/10 Punchline champ?You're MW and i'm HW, so you live in my shadow So everyone watch while I merk P harder then heads from rapbattles ^^decent 5/10 It's over son, you gunna have to take whether or not you hate it You win? Shit you couldnt even properly spell the word "favorite"! ^^decent 5/10 Plus it was always destiny for you to lose, its quite easy to see When even the leader of your crew admitted he lost a battle to me ^^yea.. fake personal i wasnt the leader 4/10 So why should you even try?Well I bet I know what you are craving I can bet my bottom dollar.....that its even more than ya life savings! ^^your first good bar 7/10 Its done,over,abolished, either way you put it, ya just been smacked So Prem takes the cake.........cuz he damn sure aint takin this match ^^your dopest bar 8/10 overall: 33/60 (55%) Premanition: Soc ya like your sig, its easy to take an eye off you... Flow's prediction was off, realised, now he flied off too... ^^fuck you... lol good opener 7/10 Greedy?, Only here for the money but I’ll take this freebie… Not confident, you’d ‘bet’ on me but you’d get ‘Id’d’ G…(15) ^^decent bar 5/10 “seems A.I just takin too long”, or sampled a Socrates scripture…(*) Damn! Give u tracing paper and u still don’t ‘get the picture’… ^^decent 6/10 You’d av bin in the RV dreamteam but theres a veteran clause… Even if u ‘shit on my writtens’, they’d still be beta than yours… ^^dope bar 8/10 Lyricist Lounge? Fuckin freeposting, take down them feet… Dawg you never ‘boil over’ so its clear your easy to ‘beat’…(egg) ^^good meta decent punch 6/10 U in the ‘shadows’, bitch set an appointment wiv the doctor… Socrates your done, ain’t nothin but a ‘phantom’ in this ‘opera’… ^^good closer 7/10 overall : 39/60 (65%) vote: Premanition |
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Basically, I thought Socrates edged this one out with more effective punches... Vote - Socrates |
i jsut now got soc wordplay good battle u killed him good luckk in the next round :thumbup:
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Socrates
Damn, so this herbs signature says he can see the future coming So shit, I wouldnt blame him for thinkin its bright after this sunning Good personal.. punch connected pretty well.. 7/10 Punchline champ?You're MW and i'm HW, so you live in my shadow So everyone watch while I merk P harder then heads from rapbattles I doubt many people will get this.. but yea.. i got it.. it was alright i guess.. 5/10 It's over son, you gunna have to take whether or not you hate it You win? Shit you couldnt even properly spell the word "favorite"! Attempted personal.. could have been worded into a harder punch though.. 6/10 Plus it was always destiny for you to lose, its quite easy to see When even the leader of your crew admitted he lost a battle to me Another attempted personal.. i guess this was pretty good.. 6/10 So why should you even try?Well I bet I know what you are craving I can bet my bottom dollar.....that its even more than ya life savings! Lmfao.. This was dope.. 9/10 Its done,over,abolished, either way you put it, ya just been smacked So Prem takes the cake.........cuz he damn sure aint takin this match Pretty good as well.. good shit.. 8/10 Overall - 41/60 Premanition Soc ya like your sig, its easy to take an eye off you... Flow's prediction was off, realised, now he flied off too... Who cares what Flow's prediction was.. And knowing thats not why he left.. this was just gay.. 1/10 Greedy?, Only here for the money but I’ll take this freebie… Not confident, you’d ‘bet’ on me but you’d get ‘Id’d’ G…(15) What the hell are you doing?.. this isnt even a punch.. at least you attempted wordplay though.. 3/10 “seems A.I just takin too long”, or sampled a Socrates scripture…(*) Damn! Give u tracing paper and u still don’t ‘get the picture’… I guess this was decent wordplay.. not a punch though.. 4/10 You’d av bin in the RV dreamteam but theres a veteran clause… Even if u ‘shit on my writtens’, they’d still be beta than yours… This is played to hell.. seriously.. 3/10 Lyricist Lounge? Fuckin freeposting, take down them feet… Dawg you never ‘boil over’ so its clear your easy to ‘beat’…(egg) Forced concept to the max.. also, forced wordplay, which is indicated by u having to put (egg) by the side, cause without that, it makes no fucking sense.. meaning.. this was wack.. 2/10 U in the ‘shadows’, bitch set an appointment wiv the doctor… Socrates your done, ain’t nothin but a ‘phantom’ in this ‘opera’… I guess u attempted a name flip here.. but u encountered a problem.. when you didnt fuckin flip the name into a punch.. at least you attempted to do something here.. 5/10 Overall - 18/60 Vote - Socrates.. in a landslide.. and im not even joking.. |
Closed. Socrates wins 3-2.
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