Iron Man vs Reloaded
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-10-04 at 02:48 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Reloaded has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-07-04 02:49 PM.

you spit first nigga...........

Iron Man has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-07-04 02:56 PM.

your too old to spit with me Iron Man/
you got more grease on you than a 2 year old frying pan/

Reloaded bout to cook ya/
fake Justice League motherfucker/

you dont wana spit with the best/
you will just get fryed like all the rest/

your profile says super hero/
but your just a lyrical zero/

can you rhyme?no/
cause in this battle the villan beats the hero/

he's choking..........

Yo, ya hits would’nt be warm if battle me wit *fur glovez*/
Or even on fiya if I lit ya fist covered in *surplus*//
Battlin me is useless, like you “reloadin” a *empty clip*/
Ill return stolen bullets from dis "bitch", wit 8 shotz like *50 cent*//
Spitten bulletz have u doin Matrix *back flips*, endin up in *plastic*/
Strech this fagget like a *elastic*, and lost in a car like *chapstic*//
Im bakin dis Jamiacan, u fakin like "Mrs. Cleo"
Dis faggetz *p.o.-ed*, cuz im da new addition winnin 2 dis site like *"neo"*/



Upp

uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: Iron Man

vote goes to Iron Man. his punches weree alot more hard hitting than reloaded, he had nice word play and some good metas, they were funny.

flow goes to Iron Man, reloaded, you shit was rushed, i was un even, and it wasnt ell structured, enough said.

vote to Iron Man , please return the favour and vote on one of the battles below

This was feedback posted for Iron Man
 

checkin polls............................................

Voted For: Iron Man

Iron man - iight spit man, some places didnt rhyme but you had a good flow.

Best Line - Im bakin dis Jamiacan, u fakin like "Mrs. Cleo"
Dis faggetz *p.o.-ed*, cuz im da new addition winnin 2 dis site like *"neo"*/

Worst Line - Battlin me is useless, like you “reloadin” a *empty clip*/
Ill return stolen bullets from dis "bitch", wit 8 shotz like *50 cent*//
(coulda been hott)

Reloaded - iight spit man, your flow was ok .. you need to work on your punches.

Best Line - you dont wana spit with the best/
you will just get fryed like all the rest/

Worst Line - Reloaded bout to cook ya/
fake Justice League motherfucker/
HMMMM.....

OVERALL - This battle was iight, I have to give my vote too.. Iron Man, he had a better flow and an all around better verse. Re man, work on some better punches and work on the flow a bit too.

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Voted For: Iron Man

imma have to go with Iron man in all
categories
it seems like reloaded didnt even want to battle

uppin 4 votez
ill return da favor

Voted For: Iron Man

Yo, ya hits would’nt be warm if battle me wit *fur glovez*/
Or even on fiya if I lit ya fist covered in *surplus*//
Battlin me is useless, like you “reloadin” a *empty clip*/
Ill return stolen bullets from dis "bitch", wit 8 shotz like *50 cent*//
Spitten bulletz have u doin Matrix *back flips*, endin up in *plastic*/
Strech this fagget like a *elastic*, and lost in a car like *chapstic*//
Im bakin dis Jamiacan, u fakin like "Mrs. Cleo"
Dis faggetz *p.o.-ed*, cuz im da new addition winnin 2 dis site like *"neo"*/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE GOOD SHIT RIGHT HERE NICE PUNCHES AND FLOW KEEP DOING YO THANG AIGHT,ELEVATE USIN PUNCHES HIT HARDER AND PUT DOWN SOME PERSONALS


your too old to spit with me Iron Man/
you got more grease on you than a 2 year old frying pan/

Reloaded bout to cook ya/
fake Justice League motherfucker/

you dont wana spit with the best/
you will just get fryed like all the rest/

your profile says super hero/
but your just a lyrical zero/

can you rhyme?no/
cause in this battle the villan beats the hero/
^^^^^^^^^^ HUH? OK PUNCHES AND FLOW ,,, U WORKED ON YO STRUTURE THATS NICE~!!!!!!!!!!! BUT ELEVATE USIN PUNCHES (HARDER) AND GOOD FLOW AND USE PERSONALS


V-IRON MAN CAUSE HE HAD BETTA PUNCHES AND FLOW

RELOADED-USE HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW AND USE PERSONALS

~PEACE~ RETURN AN FAV

Voted For: Iron Man

weak
weak
battle

flow-nobody, both gotta work on this

punches/personals-basically both were not good but iron man had harder hitting ones in this case, both gotta elevate a lot more no hate jus truth

good luck peace