Blacksmith__Vs.__`talic
 

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Due asap.

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I`m quick to stomp on this fool.. have ya brain`s in-print
You lack talent
So i stay rantin`.. an leave ya buried with a 2 minute stint
Oh you didn`t.. did you? Blacksmith? The fuck is that? A diss?
Another net-whore
Your talent`s questioned more.. than the line above this
An Wacksmith improves to stay level with herb`s
Spare the nuisance
You make less sense.. like startin` ya verse with a blurb
See Admin`s are sure to delete ya script an bin it
The second error
I dissed you twice.. your first mistake was postin` it
I`ll warn ya now.. i`v heard it all before.. you got nothin` new
Cussin` me?
You should quote me.. to have a chance of typin` dope too.

aint done this in a minute so check it..
This guy is just dancing with bad vibes..regular casualty on front line, cos hes prone to bad rhymes.
im a heavy hitter so its best you play a ready quitter..your whole flows a tip of hollow needing heavy fillers.
Im a heavyweight while your just punching thin air...its obvious your transparent, your 'rhymes' just 'aint there'.
reaching up at me is the only time youll reach for the sky..he asked for a battle so hes 'Ready 2 Die'.damn hes 'Unbelivable'
this aitn business so dope rhymes you cant afford..cheap mug doesnt know short dicks 'cum short'.
your method dont kill me, its just your wackness,, your brain caps shattered looks like your spittin in practice
you punch cotton bags while i rush rotten fags...it was inevitable this limp dick was gonna end up last...

pz

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Blacksmith I really like your flow and your style. nice flow all together.
return the favor to: taken over vs. lyrical method (vote taken over)

vote= Blacksmith

Blacksmith you killed. nice floe 7 punches. your mult's were good too. you had anice floe. Casual you flowed alittle too casual. your verse looked a like ah newbe's. step it up.

vote=Blacksmith

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haha 2-0 ..good work phil thought u came real creative here fam
uppin for more votes i guess
holla bk

Fook you.

1-0.

An two wack votes.

:gfy:

I`m quick to stomp on this fool.. have ya brain`s in-print
You lack talent
So i stay rantin`.. an leave ya buried with a 2 minute stint
Good opening
Oh you didn`t.. did you? Blacksmith? The fuck is that? A diss?
Another net-whore
Your talent`s questioned more.. than the line above this
An Wacksmith improves to stay level with herb`s
Spare the nuisance
This is mediocre for a punch
You make less sense.. like startin` ya verse with a blurb
See Admin`s are sure to delete ya script an bin it
The second error
I dissed you twice.. your first mistake was postin` it
Good punch
I`ll warn ya now.. i`v heard it all before.. you got nothin` new
Cussin` me?
You should quote me.. to have a chance of typin` dope too
Aiight closer


aint done this in a minute so check it..
This guy is just dancing with bad vibes..regular casualty on front line, cos hes prone to bad rhymes.
Good opening
im a heavy hitter so its best you play a ready quitter..your whole flows a tip of hollow needing heavy fillers.
Ok punch
Im a heavyweight while your just punching thin air...its obvious your transparent, your 'rhymes' just 'aint there'.
Ha hah ha
reaching up at me is the only time youll reach for the sky..he asked for a battle so hes 'Ready 2 Die'.damn hes 'Unbelivable'
I like this one
this aitn business so dope rhymes you cant afford..cheap mug doesnt know short dicks 'cum short'.
Nice
your method dont kill me, its just your wackness,, your brain caps shattered looks like your spittin in practice
eh, this was kinda......
you punch cotton bags while i rush rotten fags...it was inevitable this limp dick was gonna end up last...
Need a better closing

Aiight I'll show ya how it goes
Casual-8.5
Blacksmith-9

Casual I really wasn't feeling your flow

Oh shit sorry. My voet don't count. It says I need 200 posts to vote. Ya'll gotta say that before You atrt the bettle. DAMN!

LoL@cas-u-hoe..i just realised you changed your name...still aint
gonna hide the fact your loosing mofucca haha..all luv playboy
keep the votes commin peeps

You`re weak Raymond.

Look at who`s voted for you an the quality of their breakdown.

The fuck outta here.

`Lyrical Method` and `taken over` have got the same IP`s.

I hope you haven`t made alias`.

An no it isn`t `all luv`.. watch ya chin Mandela.

I really liked Blacksmith's verse. He used nice multis and hard punches along with enough humor to keep me interested.

"Im a heavyweight while your just punching thin air...its obvious your transparent, your 'rhymes' just 'aint there'."

I particularly liked that line.

Casual had a unique flow - I had to read it twice to be able to say it correctly in my head. He had some good punches but i ust wasn't feelig them as much as Blacksmith's. I did like Casuals closer though:

"I dissed you twice.. your first mistake was postin` it
I`ll warn ya now.. i`v heard it all before.. you got nothin` new
Cussin` me?
You should quote me.. to have a chance of typin` dope too."

In the end though, I have to give it to blacksmith for his pucnhes.



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