It's My Turn Snippit -Speats
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3398696

its call Its My Turn, its my demos song

enjoy

imma link two links in a minute

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220431
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220452

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Listening...

Dope beat haha...

Singing comes in...it's pretty cool...quality is blah...what kind of mic do you use..? I wasn't feeling the hook...Too spaced out.

Overall, it was pretty decent stuff.

Keep it up.

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beat is pretty cool i like it did u make it?
flow is ok
lyrics are ok i dont think its demo material
not really liking ur voice
overall ok track

listning...............................

beat come in nice...like tha stringz.........

nice voice for this.......................

flows nice..........on point.......................

lyrics r dopeness good vibe.........................

deleivery good ish...........................

qualityz nice.................................

hook is nice................catchy i was feelin it.............

Feed used 1/26/06 "fresh like me"

werd thanks....

i've heard this beat before and i dont like it i hate the guitar...not feelin your delivery...your hook isnt bad just put some ad libs in between...pet peeve:fade the song out i think it's ugly when the beat just stops suddenly. keep doin ya thing and stay up!!
peep me:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220467

hey speats u need to drop 2 song links
so replace the 2nd one

hmm
beats nice

flows getitn there

delivery neesd uppin

emotins aight

well lyrics are koo

upp your presence you dont sound confident at all

overall:6/10


Feed used 1/28/06 "This Aint That"

at the beginin of the ebat i thought this was the outkast 'Roses' beat lol, but man this beats siiick, u mind sendin it to me? aim: ShawnPhillips905

flow- pretty nice, good swagger
emotions- coo
delivery- pretty nice
hook- nice
lyrics- pretty nice, seep ish

only thing i DONT like..is the french accent lol, but u cant help that so its all good.

track is goin pretty well, finish it up tho.

RTF


Feed used 1/28/06 "On The Road Again"