11. Gunit101. Vs. 54. Cenario
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Battles open Friday Night At 12:00 AM Eastern Time Check-Ins Due By Sunday At 12:00 AM Eastern Time Verse's Due By Tuesday At 12:00 AM Eastern Time Voting Ends Thursday At 12:00 Am Eastern Time 10 Lines No Biting No Feeding No Recycling The Person With The Most Votes By The Deadline Wins If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney! Good Luck! |
You lose, sorry about that.
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His last battle.
verse so soft, plus ya flows off, i'll have ya aching kid seriously, your lines gotta be font size two, just to make em fit even failed at fakin it, ya minds empty they say rhymes going pro? not when i peep your rhyme sceme, n c aa slap down this bitch ho, just so this kid know i'll make you such an O, C... that you become a hit show i've heard of no win, but this 'bout to get hairy yo cuz i'm facing more like a lose, lose, lose, lose, lose, lose scenario kinda scary though, you still get props.. its true, but i looked at your last battle and... AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH YOU SUCK! ^ that's called a personal, see |
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it's 10 lines people, just new at trying this structure, kinda shitty but still reasonable
i hear ya the best if so why were u only nominated twice for the 2 mil dollar prediction kid is weak minded, gives into peer pressure, type to o'd off his father's perscription like throwing paper balls at wrestlers, ya verses are weak attempts to try and throw away .................................................. .................................................. .....ya opposition a legend how when giving bj's to men with a grenade in ya hand is the only time u blow .................................................. ..............................................away ya competition like car tires or super balls thrown into tar pits ya talent has ya career barely rolling it's funny, i'm wondering how ya ranked 11th when ya reign on top'll end up shorter .................................................. ...............................................the n gary coleman cocky huh, ya got jokes or at least they mad me laugh but take that shit to comic view we all know ya not here for ya passion of rapping, ya here for the dough to pay off ya .................................................. ....................................rent for u and momma too now if u look close i'm not really sick in the head but for this murder i'll take pleasure how are u susspose to be the best when u don't measure up like a broken tape measure |
v/ g-unit 101
he had better punches and personals..........he came with better wit.....and wordplay....... re-born- you had one good punch the gary colemen line.........but that was about it....you didnt come as creative as g-unit did ..... v/g-unit101 |
even failed at fakin it, ya minds empty they say
rhymes going pro? not when i peep your rhyme sceme, n c aa slap down this bitch ho, just so this kid know i'll make you such an O, C... that you become a hit show i've heard of no win, but this 'bout to get hairy yo cuz i'm facing more like a lose, lose, lose, lose, lose, lose scenario vs. Nothing of Cenarios.. That garbage was wack.. Nothing but shit wordplay.. Vote - Gunit. |
ok structure tie first dudes lines wer uneven reborn stretched as hell
vocab reborn by far lol punches and personla g unit his verse was filled with personals where as reborn didnt have m,any and quite a few lines were played flow not that its that big of a deal in text gunit reborns shit didnt flow due to his stretched lines vote gunit for better flow and of course punches and personals thats waht wins u the battle |
hey im only seeing 3 explanations and 4 votes who voted that wasnt supposed to?
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someone accidently voted so i deleted the post.. its still 3-0 though one more vote for a K.O
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basically gunit101. won this and i dont think there is a need for me to go into a long explanation for it but cenario that new structure killed your verse ... no matter how small you make the text size its still stretched... and your punches were just decent nothing really stood out... gunit101. your verse wasnt that great either but you had 1 or 2 good punches and better structure thats why i think you won
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Gunit101. Wins By K.O 4-0
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