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Week 1: Mardu Entite (0-0) .vs one way (0-0)
Wednesday: Battles are set up Friday: Mardu Entite 1 bar Saturday: one way 2 bars Sunday: Mardu Entite 1 bar Tuesday Night: Battles Close Feeding is allowed and will be optional |
This guys the type to get liquid courage from wine spirits
So his sights a blur b and he can't seem to fine lyrics |
What the fuck kinda name is that I can immediately tell you lacking wits
but with a flow like that no one expects you to catch my drift I'll smack this bitch cause your even to broke to buy a win man..... was out on the streets Tuesday yelling "change"......with a tin can |
No hunch why no ones support'n ya junk prolly cuz thas one way to be force'n a punch
4 Down? Bitch resort to the punt, personals ya left to make up like masochist divorced to a drunk |
vote up. should be interesting.
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Mardu Entite
This guys the type to get liquid courage from wine spirits So his sights a blur b and he can't seem to fine lyrics Whack. No hunch why no ones support'n ya junk prolly cuz thas one way to be force'n a punch 4 Down? Bitch resort to the punt, personals ya left to make up like masochist divorced to a drunk This was just fucking stupid. The multi's failed and the punch had no impact. one way What the fuck kinda name is that I can immediately tell you lacking wits but with a flow like that no one expects you to catch my drift It was stretched and weak, but a nice attempt. I'll smack this bitch cause your even to broke to buy a win man..... was out on the streets Tuesday yelling "change"......with a tin can The set up was stupid, I get the Obama shit, again nice attempt. You both really need to elevate your punchlines. Nothing was really impressive here. I have to give it one way for having some ideas and at least some punches that landed. Vote: one way |
This guys the type to get liquid courage from wine spirits
So his sights a blur b and he can't seem to fine lyrics ^^i might be missing something here but it seems pretty simple What the fuck kinda name is that I can immediately tell you lacking wits but with a flow like that no one expects you to catch my drift ^^decent I'll smack this bitch cause your even to broke to buy a win man..... was out on the streets Tuesday yelling "change"......with a tin can ^^played but alrite No hunch why no ones support'n ya junk prolly cuz thas one way to be force'n a punch 4 Down? Bitch resort to the punt, personals ya left to make up like masochist divorced to a drunk ^^i'd say this is the best punch of the battle v/ mardu for the last punch |
Mardu Entite
This guys the type to get liquid courage from wine spirits So his sights a blur b and he can't seem to fine lyrics meh, its pretty played worthelss punch, but atleast you had some type of creativity going with it.... No hunch why no ones support'n ya junk prolly cuz thas one way to be force'n a punch 4 Down? Bitch resort to the punt, personals ya left to make up like masochist divorced to a drunk this was going somewhere pretty good, but than you just like tanked it hard when you started with that 4 down part, and the punch was just really really really really forced. one way What the fuck kinda name is that I can immediately tell you lacking wits but with a flow like that no one expects you to catch my drift this punch was just as weak as the other dudes first bar. I'll smack this bitch cause your even to broke to buy a win man..... was out on the streets Tuesday yelling "change"......with a tin can this was the best bar out of the enitre battle...only becuase it had an actaully set up and some wordplay..althought he punch was whack . i thought the battle could have been better, i wont lie....but, i'm just glad 2 people showed up, so props to both of you and hope to see you guys in the leauge for a while Vote: one way |
Mardu Entite
This guys the type to get liquid courage from wine spirits So his sights a blur b and he can't seem to fine lyrics eh. extremely week. kind of just a throw away bar really. like you were gonna lead up to something but couldnt. No hunch why no ones support'n ya junk prolly cuz thas one way to be force'n a punch 4 Down? Bitch resort to the punt, personals ya left to make up like masochist divorced to a drunk Multi's were hella forced, and the punch had potential but you kinda just knocked it off one way What the fuck kinda name is that I can immediately tell you lacking wits but with a flow like that no one expects you to catch my drift Stretched, Better than the first guys first punch but sitll very weak and easy. I'll smack this bitch cause your even to broke to buy a win man..... was out on the streets Tuesday yelling "change"......with a tin can Best punch by far, and it was still kinda weak. the set up wasn't really a set up, just a filler line so you could throw the other out. the last line was what actaulyl made it already with the attempt at wordplay kinda weak battle, both attempted well just didn't follow through. work on wordplay, punchs, even a little vocab. but hell..i have the same problem. ha :shoot: |
Mardu Entite
This guys the type to get liquid courage from wine spirits So his sights a blur b and he can't seem to fine lyrics Could have been worded better, weak concept. Overall not really a punch. No hunch why no ones support'n ya junk prolly cuz thas one way to be force'n a punch 4 Down? Bitch resort to the punt, personals ya left to make up like masochist divorced to a drunk This def. had potential man. With re wording, and shortening up ya lines a bit This could have been dope, but it was poorly executed. one way What the fuck kinda name is that I can immediately tell you lacking wits but with a flow like that no one expects you to catch my drift Simple, played. But a descent attempt I'll smack this bitch cause your even to broke to buy a win man..... was out on the streets Tuesday yelling "change"......with a tin can Nice. Vote: one way |
This guys the type to get liquid courage from wine spirits
So his sights a blur b and he can't seem to fine lyrics cool pun here, but thats all it was...a pun not really a punch. No hunch why no ones support'n ya junk prolly cuz thas one way to be force'n a punch 4 Down? Bitch resort to the punt, personals ya left to make up like masochist divorced to a drunk way too stretched. i think you focused a little too much on multies, but the punch was coo. What the fuck kinda name is that I can immediately tell you lacking wits but with a flow like that no one expects you to catch my drift a little played but a good jab at him I'll smack this bitch cause your even to broke to buy a win man..... was out on the streets Tuesday yelling "change"......with a tin can played again, could predict the punch from the start of the 2nd line but a nice simple jab i'd have to give it to One Way for keeping his punches short and sweet. maybe not too sweet, but you get it. Mardu had a punchless pun and an over stretched 2nd bar. vote - one way |
one way wins 1-0
mardu 0-1 good battle you guys, thanks for both showing. |
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