FIVESTAR GENERAL vs Mike Macs
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-22-06 at 11:56 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Mike Macs has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-22-06 11:28 AM.

FIVESTAR GENERAL has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-22-06 11:31 AM.

Ok Here It Goes-
This Wack Mc Is About 2 Get Lyrically Devoured/
U Accepted Da Battle, Your Stupid But Not A Coward/
This Hoe Iz 2 Slow It'll B Dayz Before He Realizes He Lost/
Jus A Pussy Without Heart Off Ta See Tha Wizard Of Oz/
Another Wack Rapper Puttin Real Thuggs Ta Shame/
Im Block-tested Fivestar General...battle Acclaimed/
Now Pay Respects Cuz Lyrically Your My Son/
U Also A Turf-hopper Don Even Noe Were U From*/
I Keep An Arsenal Of Words,nouns,adjectives And Verbs/
2 Verbally Assimilate Fake Ass "macs" And Herbs/
So Texually U Becoming Equvilent 2 A Dead Man/
Nand No Visine Can Clear Up Tha Glocks Red Eye**/
So Don Don Try, Jus Eat Ya Wheaties And Re-up On Ya Minerals/
An Maybe Learn Dat Cadets Like U Should Challenge Da General/

*he Says Hes From Atl But His Email Sayz Crooklyn
**red Eye Pertaining 2 A Beam From A Laser Like Ones Used On Guns For Accuracy

In My 11th Line Change Dead Man 2 Dead Guy Datz Wut It Should Say

Fuck you talkin about you ain't drop a verse yet just correct it then submit.

You spell so bad, had me thinkin yo alias is tornados second account
And ya verses, like mc hammers dough, will never amount
Readin yo raps is sufferin, shits feels like chronic *indigestion*
N makes no sense, like you talkin to whites in ebonics
Cypher you claimin to be a father, like you eva fucked a whore
N you provin 2 have skillz is like ya dick....nothin eva seen before
It's like I'm the only real nigga here, put all ya bogus rumors to rest
Actin like you real but you as fake as pamela anderson breastz
Ya punches like chris tucker stand up, annoyin, shit's just bad humor
Horrible, you rappin good is outta the ordinary, abornmal, just like a tumor
Stick with the title you got, cus weight, you'll neva be carryin
False info you be givin is like two gay niggas, never be marryin

Ok drop btw I was born in brooklyn n moved to atl couple of years ago, I just put my current location there, fuckin stalker....

btw if you don't understand my drop then don't fuckin vote, I'm blacklistin n e one who duz so they can't do that in my future dropz..

Voted For: FIVESTAR GENERAL

heres da break down-
opener-even tho it barely makes sense-mike

punches-general had som clean ones-This Hoe Iz 2 Slow It'll B Dayz Before He Realizes He Lost/
Jus A Pussy Without Heart Off Ta See Tha Wizard Of Oz/
andSo Texually U Becoming Equvilent 2 A Dead Man/
Nand No Visine Can Clear Up Tha Glocks Red Eye**/
So Don Don Try, Jus Eat Ya Wheaties And Re-up On Ya Minerals/
An Maybe Learn Dat Cadets Like U Should Challenge Da General/
mikes punches were mostly to basic and didnt connect for example-Readin yo raps is sufferin, shits feels like chronic *indigestion*
N makes no sense, like you talkin to whites in ebonics
* that was wack beyond all reason*
so punches goes to-general
closer-general
mikes closer wuz to basic an not focused
V/=general

I just said if you don't fucking understand it don't fucking vote dumbass, tornado is this nigga... .If you check some of generals posts he fucking talks like retard, and mc hammer has no money, bankrupt, his rap, like mc hammers dough, will never fucking amount, it's as simple as if you didn't understand don't fucking vote dumbass...


Upp #1

mike i don giva fuck were u wer born itz jus a personal don take it personal
uppin for votes

Voted For: Mike Macs

5star you never really grasped the meaning of a bar...you would switch from punch to punch each line, instead of following thru with yo thots in a complete bar. Mike your shit was just played. Pamela Andersons breasts. you can do better than that. althought both verses werent so hot. im givin it to Mike for personals. punches were aight. keep it up.

vote: Mike Mac's

This was feedback posted for Mike Macs
 

ok battle coudnt pick winner so tied....................

Thx lol but I couldn't think of another line cus I rushed through it...........


Uppin #2