What's going on by: Rippa Boi
love hate violence and pain
crazy nigga that is what driving me insane but that's all that is left in the world now a days and the ones who have faith in it somhow get put in graves what are we surposed to do with a world full of comotion that has only one motion what is down and is almost gone tell me what is going on why is it we cant stand to gether and be strong but be divided and weak to the point we cant even get along not to mention the next breath we take may be our last cause as we walk past some other nigga may put a bullet in our ass every day a brother dies and every day mothers cries why cant we do right in our lives why do tears of love hate violence and pain fall from our eyes someone tell me before it is to late and we are all gone people tell me what the hell is going on peace |
you know what that was pretty good man, you got some skill
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The topic was a good one, I thought that you could of elaborated a lot more and showed more emotion. Your wordplay was very boring, and I lost interest. your open and close were your best lines. but very mediocre.
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that was good, acctually stayed on topic ;)
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