LIGHTWEIGHT: BlAzInHoT (1-0) vs. Oz. (3-2)
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checkity checkity
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Going Under Cant hold on anymore man,im going~under, lifes jus my growing~blunder Theres quik sand flowing~under me, n for me man its not slowing~wonder Ingulfs my mind, how'd i get ta this~damn~point, I look bak disappoint- Ment is all i can remember. only 29, but still smoking this~damn~joint I'm sitting on my couch in my shitty~apartment, not a pretty~compartment Wholes punctured in the wall,three rooms, small like a glove compartment Da stuffing comming out of da couch,40 ounce in hand as i go to crouch Puke on the floor,sit back rub my unshaved face and think as i slouch The wall paper is droopin down on the wall, this place falling~apart Phone rings,callin~apartment manager demanding money im stallin~start To say ill get it,but she hangs up, jus a lie i got nothin for~rent Nothing anymore~spent it all gambling, those drugs, n some more~went To women,walk over to the rooms~small~sink, countinue to consume~my~drink N smoke dat joint,stair in da cracked mirror,ugly face in it,resume to think That i was nothing since a small~kid, get dizzy n grap the wall~rid Myself agian of vomate. when i was seven my school got the call~hid The truth, they said my parents were gone, that they had dissapeared N den put me in an orphanig, n no one wanted me n this~brought~tears Started den n my life kept goin~down, the waters jus been growing~drown At anypoint i think i jus mite cuz my life neva been easygoing~frowns Now indented on my dirty face, return to the living room witout grace Toppel onto the floor, screaming out loud gotta get out of this place I stand up n stagger over to the window, savin thoughts within~blow In den out, angrely pull it open, my head spins~snow starts to blow Into my apartment, 8th floor, below, covering the ground the~snow Den i slowly get up on the ledge, i see~no point in life n then go |
Damn Sorry Yall My Comp Feel off on Me and its been in the shop so i couldnt check or drop early as usual but ill prolly drop tommorow
checkin in |
Why? Why is a word of questioning Thoughtfully a answer should be given Slowly but not hastly to finish guessing For the answer to the why question Why, is a question were the answer is a reason why should the leaves come and go becasue of season? Like many I think the best season is spring If for exception of poisin ivy and bee stings Why, why must people past? which makes crying tears that always last the thought of past is in the present why must a king discriminate against the peasants? The worlds most intelligent questions start with why Why must we live just to die? Why must why be a question? why,why,why is that even the question? |
aight uppin votes
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Oz. came with some like grade three shit.
Vote: BlAzInHoT |
why you say that because it wasnt long ?
Inadequate voting dog your name is like some third grade shit |
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My name is a joke, and no it wasn't because it wasn't long. I usually don't write any of my pieces over 20 lines. It was just shitty. Quote:
It sucked, straight up. |
Only half* decent. <- What I meant to say..
Anyways.. Vote: BlAzInHoT |
there, he provided explanation.
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Umm :huh?:
I Didnt ask for an explanation I was jus being myself and Umm I Dont Need any critiquing from a vagina :roll: or someone who goes by the name of wingspan ? WTF :wtf: |
wingspan aka the other mod of this league
yeah, blah blah, i own you and such. |
No No WingSpit
You Own This League Not Me You Need To Check Yaself edit: to make it clear, my old name was drakel, and yes, i have owned you, can own you, and will always own you no more freeposting. |
1-0 me uppin more votes
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