Zach da Ripper VS Desert*616*storm
 

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The name Desert Storm just sounds fuckin gay,
this nigga's tryin to battle me and he's been here for one day;
Like a two dollarbill, this fagots queer,
damn losin a battle, what a start for the new year;
This fat ass nigga thinks that he's in charge,
I bet his army fatigue's were extra extra large;
Get ur big ass up get the fuck off the computer,
ur like the past and im more like the future;
This fag tryin to battle, he must have a lot of guts,
ur in slow motion, cause ur on ludacris's nuts;

iight 1 sec dawg i'm sendin up my shit-

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How can you expect me to be serious when I'm battlin "Jack the Ripper"?
Wit ur skillz You could still get pounded down by that other dog-Kipper

Desert Storm.....C'mon dawg, guess you haven't heard quality-music
You used plagiarising off of dr.seuss books and then abusin it!

Shit you ain't been here longer than 2 months! So why you dissin me?
You just envying, and hatin, wishin you were me!

0-1 dawg, i'm predicting that as the score
I'm a drop ya down to -stomp- as ya hit the floor

Aight dag it ain that fuckin hard to write a rhyme. If u need any lessons hit me up after the battle.

That is if we ever do Battle

Flow_ Da rippers flow was better by far cause it pieces itself together without much work

Punches_ Da Ripper got em on the punches too.His line about the fatigues was bannanas.

Wordplay_ Both were lacking but Desert Storm got him by using plagerizing

Multis_ Tie cause neither used multis they both need to work on that.

Structure_ Tie. They both used the 2 lines rhyme format and never really switched it up.

Win_ Zach Da Ripper

desert...in my opinion took this...zach, you coulda come ALOT harder. ya punches were wack, flow was off, structure was aight, you didn't have any good punches, multis, metas, or wordplay.

desert, you had an aight verse. ya structure was fucked but regardless...it was a good verse..

vote-desert

both elevate....

This was a pretty weak battle to tell you the truth....oth need elevation in every category.....Punches need to be elevated for both mcs.....but my vote goes to Desert....he barely had the better punches in this battle...that's what got by....stay up and elevate

This Nigga Prophacyz voted for him cause i be jokin on his dumb ass.

We need a new rule.
No vote's from people that come from the country.

That's bull shit, we all know who gonna win even u go and ask niggas to vote for u.

Thats ok if it's a fuckin tie then were gonna this over


bitch i got some shit fo u

**Desert69Strom** If u ever tryin to battle hit me up.

and that goes for yall fag's readin and not votin to whoever else is

^^^shut the hell up.......u got beat like a drum fag........

zach - good structure, ok flow, vocab was basic, wordplay was weak, punches only connected wit air, personals sucked ass

desert - good structure, pretty good flow, vocab is ok, wordplay was a lil basic, mulits were pretty good, some of the punches landed, ok personals

conclusion - desert takes this in multis, punches, and personals so he gets my vote

VOTE - DESERT STORM

yo since i took the time to leave my opinion id appreciate if u two did the same

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105679

much appreciated...........