insane16 vs DRAG~ON
 

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DRAG~ON has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 02:11 PM.

im da FERRO(1028) on da mic yo ass just plain suck
i throw punches an even dough u live ponds u can't DUCK

u 6'0 white male dat reak of sorry feramones
go home 2 gay love da smell of fucked butts n every room*

think u insane in da membrane naw u just ALLEN strange**
can't maintain 16 and SWEETer dan candy canes

brains u don't got em u give em beat meat more den Rocky***
fast like a horse wit mines so diss bitch try 2 JOCKEY(jock me)

Box me no just wanna get on ya knees and give me blows
u fuckin homo don't kno wut it means 2 go toe2toe

see yo philosophy is 2 suck u enough pipe 2 get rich
but wut u don't get dick don't got oil in it bitch

*he From PHiliadephia a highly gay population
** Allen Iverson on da Sixers
***Rocky da boxer from Philly n Jockeys ride horses
Ferro1028 is his im
6'0 white male is in his bio

insane16 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-10-04 12:46 PM.

ur whole crew and style got a "wannabe" tag~on/
plus ya shyt aint worth the dirt u darg~on/
i bet ya shyt is hot now cuz i put a flame unda ya ass/
u think this a game...das y ya name is listed unda da past/
i got control of the present and the futcha/
its good to kno when any rappa see ya he salute ya/
cuz i hold 2 things..power and respect/
but ya palms are empty so i devoure then reflect/
later on about if what i did was rite/
but it dont matta ima still get to sleep at night/
cuz im da kid who make ya cowards knees shake in fright/
i can drive ya ass crazzy no need for da knife or da gun/
leave u in an institution so u got no life and nowhere to run/

yo no hate or nething but let me jus break down what u did wrong.....who disses some1 on they s/n....im 6'1 not 6'0...(can he even fukin read).......im not gay u dumbass i got a fukin g/f................insane in the membrane...wow way 2 steal from another song...WACK AS SHYT!!!!!!!!!....jockey has nothin to do wit nething....neitha does allen iverson......and i dont live in philly i live in newtown u fag...i moved outta philly when i was 13 i still go there all da time but i dont live there no more......and i dont kno what part of philly u talkin bout but it aint filled wit fags where i lived and chilled...............u jus got rocked bitch........

Voted For: DRAG~ON


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Voted For: DRAG~ON

yo drag gets this for harder punches (8/10)...and he had tight wordplay which were interessting(7/10)...and his closer was cool (7.6/10)....ur structure was slacking a lil tho (dont make 'em distant)...but ur verse was overall tight!!....gd job


yo hook atleast 1 of my battles up......thanx

iight wutever lets get some more fuikin voters in here..................

Voted For: insane16

Yo drag on your begaining fell off because it sounded to me like you only wanted it to rhyme more then really saying any thing at all,,,heres what im talking about hommie

im da FERRO(1028) on da mic yo ass just plain suck
i throw punches an even dough u live ponds u can't DUCK

u 6'0 white male dat reak of sorry feramones
go home 2 gay love da smell of fucked butts n every room*

think u insane in da membrane naw u just ALLEN strange**
can't maintain 16 and SWEETer dan candy canes

brains u don't got em u give em beat meat more den Rocky***
fast like a horse wit mines so diss bitch try 2 JOCKEY(jock me)

Now that most of your verse right there,,an you didnt word it to well at all,,it sounded as if you only wanted it to rhyme like i said before.

And insane16 im going to judge it like this heres your begaining

ur whole crew and style got a "wannabe" tag~on/
plus ya shyt aint worth the dirt u darg~on/
i bet ya shyt is hot now cuz i put a flame unda ya ass/
u think this a game...das y ya name is listed unda da past/
i got control of the present and the futcha/
its good to kno when any rappa see ya he salute ya/
cuz i hold 2 things..power and respect/
but ya palms are empty so i devoure then reflect/

Theres were good lines here an there,,but your begaining killed his because you said something other then just try an make it rhyme,,,plus yours was worded much better then his was,,,,
So i vote for insane16 because his begaining was much better and he worded his better,,,an he said something other then just making it ryhme,,,,,,good battle to you both,,1

Voted For: DRAG~ON

Ok, both of you came with some good punches, good structure that stayed consistent BUT insane16 your drop kinda stopped going at Drag as hard about halfway into it. Drag kept his punches hard while keepin' it personal, i like the way you kept playin' off Philly, that was hot...
Vote - DRAG~ON

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iight keep it comin for more voters.....................

uppin for more voters to get this shyt goin..................

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