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K.ontroverz.Y 09-12-06 05:09 PM

Submit Your Songs
 
Submit your songs below. Keep in mind you need 3 votes before your song will appear on the radio. We will inform you though


Lets get 'em in.

Blay'all 09-13-06 11:48 PM

www.soundclick.com/blayboy

"If U Want It"
"Life Goes On"
"336"


if you want it- vocals can be turend up a little bit flow can be improved in parts dubs are off second verse sounds hella different flow is better in this verse but still off in a few parts
overall flow wasnt smooth enough delivery was pretty cool though dubs were off hook comes in rough
vote: no

life goes on- need to up the talking in the intro i cant hear unless i strain to listen to it
hook flow is off on one of the bars not too bad though dont like the effect on it though delivery needs to be uppes sound like youre running out of breath

the line after why god took you now too many words in that line made it a little choppy
a few others too

flow was on in the begginning fell of or 2 bars in the beggining last bar is a llittle bit off not too noticable

government sees it line flow is off stop this ish line is off a lil along with the record line

overall flow was a little choppy in place dubs were off for the most part and the hook delivery was blah
vote: no


336- flow was better no doubt
like the hook


not feeling this verse at all repeats on the ffirst part of this verse idk just weak

if it was just the first verse and the hook i probably would have said yea cause flow was on throughout but second verse was jsut mad weak to me
vote: no

TROUBLESOMEā„¢ 09-14-06 06:46 PM

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4438924

if life were like that............get at me

beat is weak to me idk
hook is mad nice
first verse was ok didnt like the bub line at all was a like story telling track and two of the lines were soft didnt really belong in there
2nd cat dubbs are off on almost your whole verse flow was pretty nice no doubt lyrically not as strong as the first verse
vote:undecided ill get back to you

Ebircs 09-14-06 08:00 PM

A drink and a beer
Thats Us
HEAT...i dunno wtf else to call it....

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...fm?bandID=82331

that's us
flow is pretty good this beat is harder to flow to than most dubbs sounded nice

i love the third verse
but vote: no


heat lyrically its nice on your verse flow is on throughout dubs are good alot of nice lines lol delivery is cool a few dubbs are off but not many

tony like the flow alot of multis got a nice swagger like your delivery

enygma alot of multis like the flow lyrically not as nice as you usually coem but pretty nice

vote: yes

shot and a beer dont really like the flow on mi's first verse lyrically its pretty nice though love his delivery though bea t is grimey feats the beat great
cho nice delivery flow feats the beat well
mi like this verse alot better no doubt love it all
cho nice verse too
but i cant stand the talking at the end lol
vote: no beacause of the talking at the end

Hood Star 09-17-06 11:36 AM

The intro for my new mixtape. straight bars, no hook. hottest shit i got right now.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4281453

vote please.


Yeah, i heard this. im feeling this track. My Vote. YES


voice wise you kinda sound like a young jada
flow is cool predictable rhyme scheme but it was on point
lyrically you were pretty nice alot of ncie lines but there were some taht were blah to me
vote: no

youngvibez 09-17-06 12:07 PM

check it
www.myspace.com/thatkidvibez
track : Young Vibez - Real Estate Diss (opening song)


Vote yes for real estate & yes for the conflict & young vibe joint

intro is dumb lol at the pops in your accapella when you jsut talking
flow is on point but weak alot of lines that you used the same word ot make it rhyme
llike the second beat better flow is off on 2 lines
third verse i dont like at all delivery doesnt appeal to em flow is more choppy

vote: no

Willa 09-17-06 02:56 PM

hmm well i think this song shoule be on here its jsut dope everyone can relate

http://www.myspace.com/illgrammatix2
budgit baller

jay and ii both vpte yes for budget baller so someone else needs to check it out

Jay Rose 09-18-06 12:05 AM

vote yes for budget baller.....

Wordz AhGod 09-18-06 03:20 AM

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4452688

My new track I wrote for my girl. Called "I Promise" just peep it with an open mind.

ok talking needs to eb upped cant really hear what your saying
beat and you are both way too loud now the bass in the ebat drowns out your lyrics somewhats
first verse sounds like you cam closer to the mic in the mid verse
vote no because volume is messed up and it makes it hard to listen to
Vote: NO

Willa 09-18-06 12:38 PM

oh yes
i also nominate
my track my blood sweat tears
and apexx's tracks
black sunglasses and
anybody out there
ill post up the links later

I vote Black Sunglasses YES. I havent checked the other Joints

-Kon

Ace Heratoga 09-18-06 01:51 PM

www.soundclick.com/chosenonesent

Da Struggle

flow is mad basic in the beggining lyrically a few wack lines in the beggining

2nd guy is alot better but theres an odd pause in the middle of the track

3rd guy voice is kind of aannoying flow gets a little choppy towards the en of your verse

4th verse probably the best verse
vote: no

The Jett 09-18-06 04:25 PM

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4382463

It's Over

The Jett 09-18-06 04:29 PM

I can't edit my votes in......gimme sum power Kon....

Willa 09-18-06 05:50 PM

theres already 3 mods in the sub so you cant so just make a seperate post

K.ontroverz.Y 09-18-06 06:03 PM

what she said......i say yes for Black Sunglasses. Imma check some more out in a few


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