the rhyme method
 

When i spit it could interfere and intterrupt your hearing/
It could knock off your earring and hurt your feeling/
I speak based on how my mind is designed and when you see me its so contempt that when you attempt to fire back itll lash again like rewind/
The method that i teach will disturb based on the verbs that i inject through the brain like poison and drugged like your on herbs/
The rhyme technique can shine any day anytime in anyway even if the skies are grey/
No matter what i say they still hostile that once you graduate from my school using the method will up you in the future on your skills/
The method circulates and cycles until you get to injured like jwill on the motorcycle/
You gotta stay constant and contest to all best to beat the rest that you defeat is whats your quest/
You cant just fall and quit cause then you wont be able to spit, youll just get hit until your in a stable condition/
You cant be bitchin cause whatever your decision is gonna be based on if your an icon or an old guy mowin the lawn/
The method contains and will remain whatever an emcee thinks to get the technique for the future so he/she can speak on whatever topic they choose to decide/
So they stay balanced and abide by their own pride/
Then they can burn the emcee like they using weapons and be battlin Whatever street they reppin to show how tough it is where they come from/
and rep for any girl that they cum from/
Bitches couldnt fight this method no matter how hard they protected like a condom/
So use the method wisely and utilize with ease and it will give you the keys to the next door to open/
And dont just sit there hopin the break from all your dopin/

thought you had some nice multis, and would have had a good flow if some lines werent stretched, it still flowed ok... some of ya vocab was a bit played out.... andi would maybe have split it, but it wasnt bad,,, quite an interesing read,, and the scheme was decent... not bad... keep at it

thanks, more feedback please