Magic MK Vs .:K:.
 

tell me when you sign

^in.........................10 lines max........................drop within 15 mins............................pz

LOL,

Ok 1 line in and already im wondering..why the fuck i battled this herb,
cause to be honest these lines aint going against sumone.
............................ they deserve............,
little hoe....im just fallen around i cant take this serious,
cause to be honest ive seen a better flow..comeing from a period,
you aint got skill kid don't say you have..your demented,
umm ill giv this to you with some maths...t
.......................he poll for K 100 as a percentage,........
fuck 10 lines merk him with 8...like a building site im going to dissmantle,
"you don't think hes wak?"...well to comfirm it ill leave this,
....................with an example.................


..waste but o/well...........pz

OK it's like this in my battle with K,
he underestimated me and he is going to pay,
you might say something lame like i'm gay
but in reality you have nothing to display,
your punchez just don't cut it in this place
so go out and live with your disgrace
please don't take this the wrong way
because the game that i play flows like a freeway
he deosn't know that he is fuckin with a real MC
And he knows that he's the one with the HIV.

................lmfao....just nik em's lines then man....wak also recycled lines in here frm your other battle....but fuck it.....woot.....pz

in my other battle i said highway.
now i said freeway. there IS a difference you know.

lol............................................... .....wak man.......also you used the nothing to display shit 2's..but o/well cnt be fucked to report this votes plz...............pz

Ok 1 line in and already im wondering..why the fuck i battled this herb,
cause to be honest these lines aint going against sumone.
............................ they deserve............,
ehhh...ok opener
little hoe....im just fallen around i cant take this serious,
cause to be honest ive seen a better flow..comeing from a period,
ok...nasty lol
you aint got skill kid don't say you have..your demented,
umm ill giv this to you with some maths...t
.......................he poll for K 100 as a percentage,........
decent
fuck 10 lines merk him with 8...like a building site im going to dissmantle,
"you don't think hes wak?"...well to comfirm it ill leave this,
....................with an example.................
good


OK it's like this in my battle with K,
he underestimated me and he is going to pay,
whack...no punch
you might say something lame like i'm gay
but in reality you have nothing to display,
whack punch
your punchez just don't cut it in this place
so go out and live with your disgrace
nothing
please don't take this the wrong way
because the game that i play flows like a freeway
maybe you should talk about him instead of yourself
he deosn't know that he is fuckin with a real MC
And he knows that he's the one with the HIV.
blah

Whack...K takes this easy...he had a ok verse...but Magic MK came whack as fuck...need to majorly elevate man...vote K for more punches...personals...everything...

Please drop an honest vote here guys...thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112459

actually. .:K:. has 11 lines. in the rules he specifically stated 10 MAX.

you such a newb man.............thats the structure i have 8 and beat you with 1 bar(not the type you drink in m8).............pz

.:k:. ur verse dunt need breakin down but imma still do it as it will give me sumat decent 2 read.......

Ok 1 line in and already im wondering..why the fuck i battled this herb,
cause to be honest these lines aint going against sumone.
............................ they deserve............,
ok opener.....seen u cum harder but do u need 2 in this???lol
little hoe....im just fallen around i cant take this serious,
cause to be honest ive seen a better flow..comeing from a period,
lmao dope line made me laugh killed his verse wit just this
you aint got skill kid don't say you have..your demented,
umm ill giv this to you with some maths...t
.......................he poll for K 100 as a percentage,........
nice
fuck 10 lines merk him with 8...like a building site im going to dissmantle,
"you don't think hes wak?"...well to comfirm it ill leave this,
lol ight finisha u actually did kill him wit 8 lines so nice future tellin lol

no 4 this bitches verse


OK it's like this in my battle with K,
he underestimated me and he is going to pay,
SHIT PLAYED 2 FUCK
you might say something lame like i'm gay
but in reality you have nothing to display,
WHACK PUNCH CUM HARDER PLZ
your punchez just don't cut it in this place
so go out and live with your disgrace
WTF??SHIT AGEN
please don't take this the wrong way
because the game that i play flows like a freeway
OK PROB UR BEST LINE BUT STILL SHIT
he deosn't know that he is fuckin with a real MC
And he knows that he's the one with the HIV.
SHITTEST OF YA VERSE

.:K:. GOT IT HANDS DOWN MAGIC LOG OFF DONT LOG BK ON COS UR SHIT

........................uppin(4)..........plz dnt sleep.............................pz

.:K:.

got this hands down with out a doubt
The other cat fuckin recycled

fuck 10 lines merk him with 8...like a building site im going to dissmantle,
"you don't think hes wak?"...well to comfirm it ill leave this, fuckin lmao

OK it's like this in my battle with K,
he underestimated me and he is going to pay,
you might say something lame like i'm gay
^ What the fuck was that
That was some 1st grade fuckin wordplay

not going line by line on this shit because it is clear who won but i'll still break it down ...K you came less than personal and used more of the hey i'm a vet and i'm gonna wreck this kid kind of approach.....because you saw some of his other work and you knew you had the win.....which is fine so you lacked personals except for the link...Good well laid punches mostly centered around the fact the kid is an herb...which clearly he his...bad structure..eheh just kidding overall a weak but still good verse....

Magic hey hi.....whackness emergency center first off.....alot of your rhyme there was filler ...filler is the absence of a punch , personal, meta, whatever the center will help explain that too you....your vocab was simplistic you recycled some of your lines and you really just don't quite have a grip yet on what a punch is so the best evalution i can give you is to check out the thread ........WEC.....and just see what you can learn..you just got what we here call merked ....vote K pz
peep it thanx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114031