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"Back in the Day"... TitoBronsky & Know Gimmix
Beat : DX7 Productions.... ( my family and producter out in B-More )
intro/hook: TitoBronsky Bridge:assorted samples/Know Gimmix Verse 1: Tito Bronsky Hook: TitoBronsky Bridge: Assorted Samples/Know Gimmix Verse 2: Know Gimmix Hook: Tito Bronsky Bridge: assorted Samples/Know Gimmix Link: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=5003278&q=hi Topic: this track is a Tribute to the oldschool.... Pioneers... those who came long before us.... paying respects.... and having a grand old time behind the microphone... YES YALL..... this is something to melt the wax right out ya ears :thumbup: and i've never sung before ..... so pardon the pitchyness :high: OYD Links :.......................... .......................... RTF |
This shit is sick mayne, not much to critique. ummm, singer's pitch was off :rolleyes:
lol jk, iunno nothin really wrong w/ this =/ |
yOU SOUND FINE ON THE INTRO/ HOOK GODDAMMMMN LOL
verse was cool no complaints switched it up from your usual. hook might have came into a little too early? idk i cant go back on the myspace player i hate myspace player lol 7 your verse sounds way diff compared to titos production wise you sound kind of muffled your vocals could be upped a little straight verse though |
yeerr this is really good...feelin the beat...sounds like a kanye one lol...nas vocal samples in the hook fit in pretty well...only thing im not really feelin about it that much is the singin in the hook haha..but its not amazingly bad or anythin', jus could be better if ya know what i mean...both mc's come nice in your verses...you suit this kinda beat tito, a lot...not too much to crit for the verses...yeer good shit this...feelin it :thumbup:
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Stank Yall very Much for the feed on this track..... Me and Gimmix are doin this live either the first or second week in March... we'll keep yall posted no doubt....
World Peace -Don Tito Bronsky LMAO @ Willas opening Critique :) |
DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPE SHIT SON WOOOOOOOOOT
Uppin this for my bizzoy TI TO THE TOOOOOOOOOOOOO |
this was ight flow and delivery was coo i like the concept......gud shit on that tito 7 ur shit was coo to quality can be upped n shit.....the only thing i wasnt feelin was the hook .....shoulda did sumthin diff then using Ahmads hook from his song...anyways hit up my song wit enygmafasho
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Word i tryed usin the Ahmad sample... but it was too slow.... and wouldnt fit the beat.... thats why i tryed my hand at vocalizing the hook... haha.... not my fortey... but word.... always good to try a lil something new every now and then....
Preciate the feed yall :high: |
peepin.. beat nice
hook wasn't bad. singing coo man, nothing wrong.... lol liked the bridge, nice samples used for it..... first verse, liked the hip-hop don't stop, don't quit shit. nice man. flow nice.... delivery coo... thought it was a lil too animated for this beat, but nothing huge. Still nice man. scratch whip up nice haha......... haha disco inferno. lol but hmmm the hook doesn't really stand out from verse. iunno what you could for it. but lyrics nice for hook word seven, quality could be better, but like the delivery. flow nice...like the emotion.... the hip-hop is dead part was coo. lol @ woo-ahh! but pretty nice hook again word overall a nice chill lil joint here man. Nice topic. y'all held this down. good shit. props 9/10 RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240005 |
Thank you Spully the Bully for the feed on the trizzle my nizzle :)
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Word......Gimix showed me the beat with the samples on it and shit and your hook. This shit turned out hot man. I really like the whole concept with the lyrics and shit. This is definitely a banger man :thumbup:
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LOL @ using the pharcyde hook thing...I'm not sure if thats your voice but lol...lol beats dope yup...the hook just aint really fittin for me, your volume is way liuder than your verse. Your verse sounded like you was trying to be to mainstream though your flow was smooth and ya lyrics was coo. Grammitix haven't heard you in a minute duke. flow was trying to stay consistant you was switchin it up here n there like you usually did. your lyrics was hot and ya delivery was good. Your volume could be upped though. overall pretty decent track yall.
rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...573#post3145573 |
Much Respect on the Feed yall .... keep it comin in :high:
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