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Kontroverzy - I'm ready (prod. shadowville)
Checc out the new joint by Kontroverzy (Me).
Lyrics & vocals provided by: Kontroverzy Beat provided by: shadowville prod mixing provided by: Lenny Blaze Listen here www.myspace.com/kontroverzycan www.soundclick.com/kontroverzy good quality. nothing but good feedbacc so far. what ya'll think. And Of COURSE i will return the favour lyrics I'm Ready 45 On My Hip I'm Ready fully extended clip I'm ready 10 niggaz in the whip I'm Ready who really wanna get hit I'm Ready To Ride..Gun On My Side.. so decide..If U ready I'm so ready...Tech N9ne So heavy.. Big mac near my balls, like cheeseburger eddie... Ducc wen i Pop, Aim for ya blind spot.. have ur brain lookin like a half empty pie box... fitted cap, Twisted Bacc, flippin staccs in my lap.. Sittin bacc..wit my gat..gimme dis..gimme dat.. i feel bad wen i leave a nigga jacced but my pride would never ever allow me to just give it bacc.. I'm a tri Spade General...Never be a friend Of U.. try and shake my hand & i'll turn u into a vegetable.. u see me goin, im rollin, blowin a hole in ya dome & leavin u open, i told ya, i stay strapped like a trojan.. my flow is, so noticed, like a mis-ile, i'm blowin.. Got 'em hopin.I'm choccin, but im the best & they know it.. No Jokin..They hopeless, u know dat im Focussed.. explodin..walk off the stage and leave the area smokin.......... I'm Ready 45 On My Hip I'm Ready fully extended clip I'm ready 10 niggaz in the whip I'm Ready who really wanna get hit I'm Ready To Ride..Gun On My Side.. so decide..If U ready It's my year...Join me Or Die Slow.. Puffin Hydro, So high, my eyes closed... But I'm Ready...Right Arm Steady.. Rag on my face, while i ride in the chevy.. chain so heavy, so my damn necc cracc the weight on my bacc, make the tires look flat... & i keep a bad bitch, she fuucz wit it all.. weed in her thong...E in her Brah.. see this a movement, we Never Fall.. We stand on our feet like givin an applause... Its crazy at night..And Nigga we the cause.. we aint criminals, we just takin wats ours.. never known bars..cuz i never show Flaws.. my levels so far, Like somewhere in mars.. the cops aint catchin me, my foes aint catchin me not as long as the shotgun right next to me.. I'm Ready 45 On My Hip I'm Ready fully extended clip I'm ready 10 niggaz in the whip I'm Ready who really wanna get hit I'm Ready To Ride..Gun On My Side.. so decide..If U ready I'm Ready To Ride..Gun On My Side.. so decide..If U ready Yeah, I'm killin these niggaz right now mayn....aint none of ya'll niggaz on my level, Lenny Blaze I See U mayn, Nate, Blaze, Sin cere, Richie, Wat up my niggaz Tri Spade 4 lyfe nigga, It's Kontroverzy The Prince, If u fuccin wit my money, all i have to say is http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3169192 & enstinctz new song "scarred tissue" I'll rtf |
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other then thaqt the hook was played but sounded smooth, just the same shit i hear from other songs n what not...not bad tho sounded slick keep it up |
hook...over mixed in my opinion...it gets drowned out by the beat as well
vocals are good tho... voice sounds good on track some pretty coo rhymes here... no real substance to the 1st verse tho... At the end of the 1st verse when u go for the multi-syllables...u needed more breath control and control of the cadence...u lost it a bit...but it was coo pretty decent track man 7.5/10 1 |
thanx famz. and yeah i know. cause wen i messed up. dude didnt even give me time to catch my breath he just hit RErecord. fucc
thanx for the feed doe |
hook is simple but still lil catchy.. sounds like it needs a lil more hypeness in it nah mean..
sounds better than most the bullshit i hear on the radio now-a-days.. nice flow ya got goin for ya.. i actually could see this payin here in Miami.. if ya added some more shit to the hook.. aint my type of music but my boy likes it right next to me... ima say 7/10 homie nice track |
thanx doo... i appreciate the feed bacc :)
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feeling the beat, thats the first thing that caught me. You got a good rap voice thats the 2nd thing i noticed. I like the hook, its commericial but thats what u need for a track like this. Felt how the 2nd verse dropped in. This track has alot of potential. I can see it like a single. lyrics were average but you didnt need to go crazy wit them on this track. good job. I def feeling it. 8.5 outt 10. props.
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thanx i appreciate the feedbacc..ill rtf on your joint
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Hook - Garbage, wasnt catchy over mixed and processed
Verses - Much better didnt expect this after hearin that hook, You fall off when you try to speed up your flow on that first verse towards the end.. Other than that this is ok .. Beat is annoyin to me .. get rid of that hook |
yes sir....thanx for the feed
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Hook: The Idea is right but it's not catchy enough to me nah mean. But it's close to that.
Verses: The multis are pretty nice, delivery is good, def we can believe ure ready..flow is regular kontro shittt Beat is pretty nuts Not much to improve jus make hook catchier, perhaps by more standout adlibs and a lil more swav on the hook nah mean. This was clean tho..8/10 |
thanx famz i appreciate dat
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i liked it, nice beat, good rhyme scheme and multies, and radio-playable...onyl thing id say is that flow is rushed in a few spots...good shit tho i liked it...
rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=242282 |
yeah thanx dawg i apppreciate the feedbacc...ill checc out your joint soon
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uppin dis again....
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