EmerginMc07 vs the_crazy_one
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-27-04 at 04:31 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

yo sorry ill drop in the morning i just got a call my girl goning to the hospittle for emengercy segery

EmerginMc07 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 04:42 PM.

yo u only got so much tim!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

the_crazy_one has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-25-04 12:13 PM.

whoomp! whoomp! im quick as hell, my platinum gloves be bustin skulls...
now how many times you gonna beat me? zip, none, null...

i hope ya momma can wait a while.....on ya death certificate..cuz...
they gonna havta get forensic scientists to figga out what tha reason for death was...

watch me suck ya blood, shrivel you to tha point you be lookin like a prune...
u couldnt spit hot if you was drinkin coffee.....in the middle of june...

boom..boom..thats the sound right before i shoot off ya ears...
then glue dem bitches to ya eyes, all you hear is drops of tears..

im no fear, i knew ya style, laughed at it and wrote this verse...
cause corpses cant talk, and i already called a hearse...

what's worse, is that if you tryed ya best, its still mediocre...
claimin you street.......nigga you just a poser...

...ya punchlines feel like feathers, dustin past my chin...
feels pretty damn good, ill stand still if you want to try again...

if you tryin to make friends, you doin a good job at it...
nevamind, ya friendly fire is right below pathetic...

you comin last like credits, cause im like a blockbuster hit...
and the only time youll win this, is if you wrote out the script...

yo ill drop lata i gota go to skooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

all right man go ahead i dont care when you drop as long as you drop b4 time runs out

THE thing is im CRAZYn a real gangsta n u wana b ONE,
He was tryin to rap but now his main reason for livin is gone,
Is he misundastood? naw jus ppl dont like wat he puts out,
Shit he think he unda da hood dis man bout to b down for da count,
In dis battle wat was u thinkin goin against me?,
Surly u dint think yo weak ass ryms wud offend me,
Overall bottom line end of discussion u whack,
Verdict says rao aint workin counrtys callin back,
EmerginMc aint playin mutha fuka dis aint no Joke,
Re read dat line yo if repsect was money ud b broke,



jus sume shit put togetha in 5 minutes!!

yo i spelt out

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dint evn notice

yo uppin

Voted For: the_crazy_one

Arite.....

Punches = Crazy_One
Vocab = Crazy_One
Structure = Equal
Metas = Crazy_One
Wordplay = Crazy_One

Crazy KILLED It, Nice Punches, Humour, Top Notch Wordplay
CRAZY HAS MY VOTE n Datz Fa' Sho'

Emergin, STEP YA GAME UP....You Have Potential But You Didnt Go @ This Kat Hard Enuff, Elevate In Ya Next Battle n You'll Come Good

RETURN THE FAVOR N VOTE ON MY BATTLES

Good Lookin My Nigguhz

!!1!!

thankz b and uppin x2222222222222222222222222222

Voted For: the_crazy_one

The Crazy One got this one cuz.. He came with a lot more content in his verse.. i liked the one about how he can't spit hit even if he drunk coffe in the middle of ..june.. emerginmc was okay, he just basically gave disses and shit, but crazy one had some good punchlines.. i have to go with the crazy one for better punchlines and structure with more content..

return the favor in this battle right here cuz, thanx..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143643

Voted For: EmerginMc07

i think this goes to emrgin this is how,

his struc wwas good although his pucnhes where a little off they still did hit prety hard i enjoyed it but you do need to elevete emergin!!

Crazy one just keepin working at vocab cus he had you on that catagory

v/emrginmc