retard101 vs the_crazy_one
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-26-04 at 01:16 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

retard101 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 01:16 PM.

you think you hard cause you started a crew/
but if i ran into you on the streets id beat the hell out of you/
id make your momma shrill when she looks at you/
everone in can kill you cause you aint shit/
im the retarded chosen one im the king/
i just found out that almost everone in your crew is only a minimal Age 18/
so i think you just need to get the FUCK out of R-and-B

the_crazy_one has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 02:45 PM.

i didnt even challange you and you didnt challange me so what up with this battle i guess wont another loss on your record o well

look at his last battle with me first ratard101 and mine last battle

i didnt challange him but know hes going for round two
and i gantree you this again he will lose

i checked your records and you have like 6 open battles
and the thing your losein everyone

and i think the reason why is that because every one
is either a feed or bite

and i gantree you that this one too
when ever you drop it

and i can gantree you that this time
that if you bite ill trun you in

uppin X1

Voted For: the_crazy_one

the open battles thing got him, personals always seem to sting hard.. but you personals gave you the win, your punches were subpar and so were his, but when you said he had six battle open & he's loosing all of them, i laughed.. one should have humor in any verse.. but you get this because of personals ans structure..

can you return the favor with a vote in this thread, thanx.. heres the link..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144411

uppin x2 dont sleep yall at lest give some feed back

Voted For: the_crazy_one

both verse need work
but crazy_one gets my vote
had a personal and his flow was
better Retard sum of yo shit didn't rhyme
so u could get my vote but nice try vote
on da battles in my sig honestly

uppin x 4

uppin again DONT SLEAP YALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL LLL

Voted For: retard101

aight this was the weakest battle ever on Rv...but you got this becuz that other guy didnt even take time to ryhme.....like none of his lines rhymed but you rhymed atleast 3 times good battle .........next time take timeand ask your comp if you can prewrite....

uppin this shit yall

Voted For: the_crazy_one

Not The Strongest Battle I Ever Saw, Ya Both Need To STEP IT UP a Notch...

Punches Goes Too RETARD...
Structure Goes Too Crazy....
Wordplay Goes Too CRAZY Too...

Retard Ya Rhyme Wasnt All That Man, I Can See You Have Talent You Juss Need To Use Ya Words Better..

Crazy, I KNOW You Can Do Better, But You Still Did Good Nuff To GetMy Vote...

5/10 For The Battle..
CRAZY GOT MY VOTE

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