.Barz Of Steel. vs Verbal Shoota
 

Battle Rules:

10-16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Good Luck Black

Minimum posts to vote: 1000

Check in by: 07-02-05 at 05:44 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Come check in so I know you wont fuckin duck me again

Verbal Shoota has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-02-05 05:18 PM.

LOL...This kids new? an joined in may? LOL, Yeaaaah...

Watch the personals roll in........Like he's been on here for along as say uhmmm...BLACK MAGIK lol :thumbup:


Barz of steel? shit..i got a blow torch that'll melt 'em like Plastic
Only time you gettin applauds on the mic....is when you pass-it
UNdestructable emcee?...I dont remember you sayin your Dyslexic?
then again, read ya verse an it Shows!..like the ribbs on an anorexic
I got this bitch pm'n me daily ''yo teph, what about that battle?!''
What about it?...Kid, I GOT YOU SHOOK!...like i'm playin witta Rattle
See, FAG...I peice my words like Lego Blocks, the wins come in Flocks
Last time dude met-a-phor.............He tapped out from a ''Leg-Lock''
killin this beef like livestock....have him in witness protection on a farm
Low-life virgin...He aint never ''cuttin''...Unless you can count self-harm
DOG!...Be cool, calm, collective...... whatever, just leave the salad un-tossed
I never met any emcee before...who was eager as this whore...for a loss
Fuckin herb, claimin your new? yet you know everythin bout RV...
Joined may 05...low-life, you got more posts than MC's who signed in 03!
You wannabe me........... or maybe ...do you just wanna join RAW...???
Wont talk so tough..
........when i ram these Keys down ya throat an give you LockJaw....


Cuttin=fuckin.

.Barz Of Steel. has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-02-05 05:36 PM.

This faggot penis rubs... ya body'll end up scattered with debri in tubs
After I "fear-factor" this queer bastard..........Make him "Eat the slugs" *
This poser ain't never dump heat, he's a "Vegetarian" he "don't want beef"
Shit, he could "mix his semen with sugar" dude still won't ever "cum sweet"
Dawg you always come the weakest, I got shit that'll cut ya breathin'
Shit, "Buck" will "Get Shot"............................Like it was "Hunting Season" **
I'm a hooligan man, but how is this kid fooling with grams?
When the only "coke" he's seen........................came in an "aluminum can"!! ***
This dude flows with legends?? How? When is flow is always thrown, rejected
For "Always Having Weak Bars"...............Like "Bad Cell Phone Connections!!"
I son emcees, Teph, don't fuck with me, I run this beef.............................
I'm like "Stricnine to your insides" It's no wonder "You Can't Stomach Me"
Tephlon, you have no skill whatsoever, and you spittin flames is nonsense
Because the last sweet bar you had.........................Was made of chocolate

*On the show "Fear Factor" they make people eat slugs. slugs=bullets :shoot:

** His old name was Buck.Shot...Buck=deer and deers get shot during hunting season

***Haha get it the soda??

Everything else should be self-explainable.

this was actually a good battle.........uppin.....

uuuuuppppppppppppppppppp

This was feedback posted for Verbal Shoota
 

damn this was a hot battle and teph you ripped it with the personals

Get off his dick.......

i said it was hot battle that means you did good too dumbass and i was giving feedback to him and he did rip it with his personals so shut the fuck up you bitch ass ho

LOL







Uppin for some votes

buuuuuuuuuuump.................................... ...........

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

barz gets this

barz- good punches, fuck it, dope punches...great opener and closer, verse never really fell off, decent vocab, good multies..only thing i saw lacking was persoinals

tef- opener was hella fuckin played...dope clsoer thoguh...nice punches, bad personals, although you DID have them...pretty good verse....

breakdown:

opener-b
closer-tie
multies-tie
flow-tie
punches-b
personals-vs

my vote goes to barz

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: Verbal Shoota

Flow-Barz....structured better and placed rhyming words better

Punches-Verbal,Barz had far to many played concepts.Like semen=cumming sweet,bad cell phone connections,and beef=vegetarians.Those things have been done a million times.Those are just some...there are more played lines in ur verse.

Personals-Barz.....Ripped on the dudes old name buck shot.

Multis-probably verbal although both of you need to improve here.

Originality-Verbal...like I said before...Barz whole verse was full of nothing but played shit.

Vote-Verbal
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