!!~~im Ready For War Niggas~~!! Peep Hot New Track
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3859417
hellz yea, this shit fa all tha niggas that got shyt 2 say 2 me online and off, plus i heard this beat and had 2 write a song to it links comin.... http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2730891 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...900#post2730900 |
bump bump bump............................................
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Listening...
Like the voice... the hook's mad catchy... the beat's pretty tough... I fucks with it... flow's pretty even... got a few multies in there... dind't say anything really stand out as far as lyrics go though... the beat and the hook really made the track... RTF Replied to: Fuck What You Think |
to commercial for me...the bat sits the track though...the voice is gully though...the flow is sounding cool...maybe a little tweaking but for the most part it's cool..lyrics are sub par nothing lyrical...this is a good commerical track.bless.
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thx fa the feed, i feel good cuz i was goin for comercial, i try 2 make my shit like shyt that would get played on the radio, but thatnx fa tha feed, ima keep that in mind, bumpin......
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btw did anyone peep that shyt
"so i suggest that you stop clown, before i rearrange ya face MAKE UP YA LIP WHEN I CUM DOWN!" jus curious |
bibaty bump .
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yeah I heard it... but one witty line amongst many... doesn't make the whole track witty, and or really stand alone material lyrically... feel me? |
beat is cool
first thing that stands out is bad mixing it doesnt sound right the clown line was good but your overdubs were bad on it you made the best line stand out like whoa lol hook is cool overall this song would have been pretty cool if it wasnt for the effects or whatever your using makes you sound fake and wack in my opinion and it also sounds liek youre screaming in some parts this track had potential def not my favorite from you hit me up for a collab sometime |
aight thx, uppin for feed,
yea lol i admit im not to good at mixing, i had to use a tutorial, and im guessing it wasnt to good lol, but word H.D. i feel u, ill remember that in my next song |
bibbaty bump .
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lol throwback .
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