slow dance...
 

a friend i knew wrote this not to long ago, befor she died from brain cancer, she was 11 , thought you poetics would like ta check it


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Can't say nothing because this was posted by hazy and I also recieved this in an email plenty of times. just lettin you kno.

^ What That All About?

Lawd....People are so stupid.

iight

yeah it was posted twice wasnt it......

thats what happens with a piece that is given to the national cancer association by a patient... they take it n put it on everything, untill they get another piece, should go on the cancer wing at hospitals, guarenteed itll be up there somewere.... Didint know it was posted twice mah bad....

lmao....could duke just have been sonned???

i read that 3 years ago.

Er, you say 'she'. Yet you copywrite it to 'David L Weatherford'.

Anyway, it's a fine piece of poetry. Whoever did it. Very profound for an 11 year old. Especially such lines as

Ever told your child,
We'll do it tomorrow?
And in your haste,
Not see his sorrow?

Which makes it seem (emphasis on seem) like it was done by an older person.

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