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Bobericc_lyrics vs LPMNDCTE
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yay bitch......!
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admit it, LP you must be psyched to win this... PSYCHE! you see? you aint more live than me, don't be mad when the moneys not yours dumb whore aint gon' make it to the semi like proms with ugly sophmores your a big clown kid, sit down bitch, or I sit you down on arrival.. punch you while my fists stand you up.. ............................... the height of josh, john and final! fuck your rotten style, I mean you winning? it's an assumption man, like one setting quarter finals the week he had to go to the jump again nicks like- "you said the jump again!" again, punching this bitch be real, your chances are like the jump... now that it doesnt exist! I'm loving this shit, dissing this liar that got me bored fully and the truth doesn't belong to you, when the winner is yours truelly with the quickeninging |
ya girls strong as fuck, that bitch bound, gagged, n held me hostage
you look up to the bitch, cuz her neck is stretched like fucking an ostrid Nick constantly beat this geek so I'm not fearing words from a dweeb I'd shish kabob, but Nick already silenced & ate him in previous weeks getting smoked steadily but that's your addiction see you haven't beaten good old NICK, so you'll never stop Nic-o-teen but back to me...my kick boxing skills break jaws dude Bob & Weave are great attributes when you bring a purse with you your treat your man well but we know your the fumbling type when you drop the ball, you just hold onto the other one tight |
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admit it, LP you must be psyched to win this... PSYCHE! you see? lol, this was cool you aint more live than me, don't be mad when the moneys not yours dumb whore aint gon' make it to the semi like proms with ugly sophmores wasn't feeling your a big clown kid, sit down bitch, or I sit you down on arrival.. punch you while my fists stand you up.. ............................... the height of josh, john and final! lol, this was ok fuck your rotten style, I mean you winning? it's an assumption man, like one setting quarter finals the week he had to go to the jump again ok nicks like- "you said the jump again!" again, punching this bitch be real, your chances are like the jump... now that it doesnt exist! not bad again I'm loving this shit, dissing this liar that got me bored fully and the truth doesn't belong to you, when the winner is yours truelly not feeling was a pretty decent verse. ya girls strong as fuck, that bitch bound, gagged, n held me hostage you look up to the bitch, cuz her neck is stretched like fucking an ostrid wasn't feeling where you took the concept Nick constantly beat this geek so I'm not fearing words from a dweeb I'd shish kabob, but Nick already silenced & ate him in previous weeks na, wording is bad getting smoked steadily but that's your addiction see you haven't beaten good old NICK, so you'll never stop Nic-o-teen no but back to me...my kick boxing skills break jaws dude Bob & Weave are great attributes when you bring a purse with you the concept is ok, played but the wording is bad your treat your man well but we know your the fumbling type when you drop the ball, you just hold onto the other one tight this was ok, again with the wording though vote bob came harder |
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admit it, LP you must be psyched to win this... PSYCHE! you see? rofl, dope man you aint more live than me, don't be mad when the moneys not yours dumb whore aint gon' make it to the semi like proms with ugly sophmores this was clever and funny your a big clown kid, sit down bitch, or I sit you down on arrival.. punch you while my fists stand you up.. ............................... the height of josh, john and final! meh, not good fuck your rotten style, I mean you winning? it's an assumption man, like one setting quarter finals the week he had to go to the jump again meh, not harsh nicks like- "you said the jump again!" again, punching this bitch be real, your chances are like the jump... now that it doesnt exist! meh, ok but not that harsh I'm loving this shit, dissing this liar that got me bored fully and the truth doesn't belong to you, when the winner is yours truelly blah was ok, you started really strong and lagged hardcore at the end ya girls strong as fuck, that bitch bound, gagged, n held me hostage you look up to the bitch, cuz her neck is stretched like fucking an ostrid this was really lame Nick constantly beat this geek so I'm not fearing words from a dweeb I'd shish kabob, but Nick already silenced & ate him in previous weeks lol, this was good man getting smoked steadily but that's your addiction see you haven't beaten good old NICK, so you'll never stop Nic-o-teen no but back to me...my kick boxing skills break jaws dude Bob & Weave are great attributes when you bring a purse with you played and just not a good set up/punch your treat your man well but we know your the fumbling type when you drop the ball, you just hold onto the other one tight the wording makes this punch really bad You really need to work on your wording and set up man, you have great ideas, but they come out stale becuase of your wording Overal: Vote-Bob, he had a few harder hitting punches and just an overal better verus |
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joined RRG to spit, it's likely, that I dont have to write a thing
admit it, LP you must be psyched to win this... PSYCHE! you see? thing and see dont rhyme, AT ALL. It's a good thing you rhymed write with pyche, and that this was actually a dope bar despite not rhyming. I like it, but I wouldnt quote because of that... you aint more live than me, don't be mad when the moneys not yours dumb whore aint gon' make it to the semi like proms with ugly sophmores wacktastic your a big clown kid, sit down bitch, or I sit you down on arrival.. punch you while my fists stand you up.. ............................... the height of josh, john and final! lmfaoooooooooooooooooooooooo i didnt see this til now, fucking smooth man fuck your rotten style, I mean you winning? it's an assumption man, like one setting quarter finals the week he had to go to the jump again this was stupid, wtf does it have to do with this battle? nothing, i felt you didnt make a correlation known regarding that with ur set-up nicks like- "you said the jump again!" again, punching this bitch be real, your chances are like the jump... now that it doesnt exist! way too simple, this sucked man I'm loving this shit, dissing this liar that got me bored fully and the truth doesn't belong to you, when the winner is yours truelly weak vs. ya girls strong as fuck, that bitch bound, gagged, n held me hostage you look up to the bitch, cuz her neck is stretched like fucking an ostrid First of all: Learn how to spell ostridge. Second of all: wack. Haha sorry man, but the "look up to" concept is played but it's a nice flip with the neck shit but you made no correlation with him looking up to her in your set-up Nick constantly beat this geek so I'm not fearing words from a dweeb I'd shish kabob, but Nick already silenced & ate him in previous weeks well... this woulda been fucking dope if Shish Kabob actually sounded like "shush a bob" It doesn't. Sorry man getting smoked steadily but that's your addiction see you haven't beaten good old NICK, so you'll never stop Nic-o-teen wow, stupid but back to me...my kick boxing skills break jaws dude Bob & Weave are great attributes when you bring a purse with you no, played, bad, crappy wording your treat your man well but we know your the fumbling type when you drop the ball, you just hold onto the other one tight wack yea man sorry guys but weak fucking battle honestly, when i saw this matchup i expected more. Ok LP - dunno what that was, i've seen you go harder then this. You were struggling with your wording in this one, work on that, you HAVE to make correlation between ur set ups and bars. You can't just say random sht in a set-up and then say "he looks up to his girl... because she has a long neck" when it has NOTHING to do with ur set up, what does him needing to look up cuz her neck is long have to do with her holding you hostage and being manly? You lead me on to believe you'd follow up talking bout that but didnt. Had you said in the set-up, "Bob cherrishes his chick but...." or something like that, that has to do with looking up to a person, i mighta actually quoted you. Same applies for the rest of you shit. I liked 0 bars from you here Bob - you dropped quick obviously and it showed here, i only liked two bars from you, and they were actually real dope though, the thing is, one of them didnt rhyme... and wtf is rapping? It's the rhyming of words, that's the most basic rule of thumb eh lmao. Before wordplay, personals, multi's, similies etc etc the most basic thing is rhmying. So if your bar does have all that other stuff that has to do with rap battling, but has no rhyme, then well... you werent actually rapping at all then right? You were just saying something but you weren't rapping, you're weren't rhyming, so that bar meant nothing and you wasted it Now say see and thing outloud, no matter what accent or how you say it, that shit will never rhyme. Dont do that again... not that it really mattered in this batte anyways... other then that, the shit bout john josh final was funny v/bob |
Thanks for the breakdown all...
JTR, Imma follow your advice and try to work on linking 1st lines to my second lines... |
word, Bob advances, thanks for participating fully LP really appriciated.
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