Demi-God.... (only semi-flawed)
 

(note: bracket sections only said the first time thru tha chorus)
HOOK X 2
(a) demi-god that's only semi-flawed,
mentality ever ready ta bomb on any-song
so let me set tha standard dawg
don't get me wrong, I'm-a mu-fuckin'...

killa, psychotic mind frame splitter,
gettin' kids "hooked on junk" like I'm "spreadin' tha litter".//
"defendin' tha sinners" like "christ" only I ain't savin' they souls.//
I'm takin' em lower, 6 feet, death without closure.//
over "exposure ta meth" without an "addiction".//
descriptions raw an' real like a "vivid hallucination".// "(maaan you trippin')"
I'm loosin' patience from gainin' hate 'n' degration for ya fake creations.//
"bake" ya brain-stems with patience like a "6 hour bird".//
you like a "main course" tha way I "chew up ya verse".//
"stew'n up" like ya "crock--> pot"-luck" botched an' ya served mocked up beef.// (fake beef)
left chalked up in one piece is not even an option in your defeat.//
you scattered like the flow of your lyrics, spirit's colder than sub-zero degreez.//
it seems ya try'n but why?.. deny'n denial like people buyin' ya rhymes.//
it's quite a suprise that ya still here, well an' alive,//
well, it's a'ight.. Be-caaaauuuuussse....

HOOK

drug addict, mashin ' more than ration of crack'n'amphetimines.//
perhaps you-got better themes, but whatever it don't matter to me.//
in fact tha fact is I'm better than any competitor when I'm bent-on any-a-these.//
I got whatever ya need, weed, coke, shrooms, even some peyote for those of you who like to puke.//
try some juice, liquid G it's tha same ol' shit only in a different key.//
rippin' B's laced up with beigh stuff, makes my face numb.//
still I ain't dumb, I know tha difference in weight between a half an' an 8.//
I also know tha shit that u get... half-of it's fake.//
cut with baby laxative an' packaged in cellifane.//
stick with M-D-M-A and be amazed "boy these are great".//
see what I'm say'n.. now you understandin' that none-a this shit's an understatement.//
there's no exageration when it comes to shit I've taken..//

HOOK



NOT FINISHED...

YO THIS WAS ILL FROM EVERY ANGLE

nice

uppin'.... thx btw, but you should read it now... since ya missed the second verse..

uppin'

all you sleepers can suck my fucking dick.... .

dopeness...straight up son...keep doin' ya thing...

STOP SLEEPING

the second verse seams to troject more anger as if it was more directed to something that seriously was on your mind
the delivery carried well and the intensity was as expected from the first verse ...it seams never a dissapointment reading your work

yea.. it wasn't really directed to much, I just know alot about that topic.. I been doin' 'n' choppin' drugs of all kinds since I was like 14.. so yea.. thx

this was a real nice peice. i really liked the first verse...both were good but that one stood out to me. i kinda had trouble catchin the flow though....at times it sounded like a fast song but then it would switch up to a slow song. shit i dont know nm....shit was hott

it did switch in a couple places... that's how I flow if u peep my audios...