If Thoughts Could Kill- Conscious
 

I have posted the original version of this, on other sites...it was an acapella, but I just put a beat to it...its still incomple. my homegurl Antiquity is gettin on it, but til then I'ma post this iight.....tell me what u think

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=372546




Links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223709
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223849

intros cool the concept of the song was pretty cool delivery was nice everything was pretty much there gud drop

Beat And Mixing Needs Some Work But I Can See Your Skills

Good Work

uppin this........

You sound ALOT like AZ. This shit is dope man. Sry for the improper feed, but I'm feeling this shit. Word.....

beat, is kool. Inrto is pritty hot. Quality is good. Ur lyrics is hot. delivery was very good. words mach da beat very well. I agree about u sounding like AZ. I see dat. U got some hot skillz, keep it up homie. Check me out, if u want get at me 4 a collabo. '1'

This is a solid track. BUt, dude is far from best on the site.


ehh ehh


Don't believe the hype.

never said I was the best on this site.........anyway uppin

I said you were one of the best, not you. It's just something different, and its cool. Man, you're almost as cool as me, but not quite. Keep it up, young padawan. :love:

tight beat man...wu tang shit ?? herd it before..dont remember were

nice voice and quality is great...like the adlibs...nice flow...maby up delelvery a touch ...only thing i can say here man...tight track..like the hook bro

naw its not a wu-tang beat........its a Cormega beat

beat:7.5.......first i thought it was boring but then ya flow wit mixed well
flow:9.....u know im a fan of ya flow kid.....and ya wordz!!
hook:7...itz coo....
enjoyment:8...nice track man....

yo, i like this shit....rarely people make tracks that are on focus, other then mixtape type tracks....the hook is good....i dont really have any complaints abuot your song...except the mixing...the volume levels might be a little off....but i mean we all have problems with mixing....
for the volume levels, the adlibs seemed a lil high to me, i dunno....but yea good beat, hook, creativity...i mean you could up ya delievery...but its still real nice.....i like your style....its pretty raw, without straight out sayin "ima gangsta, ill kill you" not many people on here have the ability....good shit...keep it up

thanks for the feed btw

yea wassup man..i liked the track i always liked ya flow..the mixxin could be a lil betta tho..but still its a good track ill holla at you..

thanks man....uppin this