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A.M.O.K vs J_Trooper
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-03-04 at 01:33 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
A.M.O.K has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 01:34 AM.
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J_Trooper has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 01:37 AM.
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A.M.O.K runs pass trash talking raps, moron flee fast
Cause I'll embrassess & drop 'J.T' like Cameron Diaz, You've uploaded your Fams portrait onto you sig, kid & it's so obvious your the bitch wearing the white singlet, DO NOT ACT SMART NITWIT!!Follow what I say carefully I'd belittle his words.... but he does it by himself perfectly, Personals?You see, I'm full of them like matchmaker.com Unlike him... like a J_Trooper bout in EFL... you'll see none, 'Born n the streets' huh?Only water squirts out of ya glocks W/ blanks your fire... it's clear you were raised on Writers Block, BOOM!! |
I came in this with a Profound Image..... no time 4 this Gimmick Im into "Battelin" ni99az that reflect spirit 2 me u is a Scrimmage Look at ya Lyrical Maintenance you resemble no Preservation Dismantle ya Tounsels so its impossible 2 hold a Conversation sense the "Tension"when i enter ya buildin its full of Suspension you wouldnt be safe if you had 50 cents entourage wit ya Men my Amunition hits you with Percision, check ya rap Manual this boy george,A.M.O.K Devour more meat than a Cannibal ima make u feel me to the "T" this is nuthin but Simplicity last time u seen Pussy.... u was watchin ya mother Pee |
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Voted For: A.M.O.K
I don' t like all that gangsta talk first off all. but besides that AMOK came coo, he had better punches coz trooperkept talkin about guns.. AMOK had good stucture and better personals, so vote goes to him.. return favor with an honest vote in this battle will you? http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138556 |
This was feedback posted for A.M.O.K
A.M.O.K
A.M.O.K runs pass trash talking raps, moron flee fast Cause I'll embrassess & drop 'J.T' like Cameron Diaz, ->>I really liked this line You've uploaded your Fams portrait onto you sig, kid & it's so obvious your the bitch wearing the white singlet, ->>so-so DO NOT ACT SMART NITWIT!!Follow what I say carefully I'd belittle his words.... but he does it by himself perfectly, ->>been done before Personals?You see, I'm full of them like matchmaker.com Unlike him... like a J_Trooper bout in EFL... you'll see none, ->>been done before 'Born n the streets' huh?Only water squirts out of ya glocks W/ blanks your fire... it's clear you were raised on Writers Block, ->>pretty cool closer It was close but I say you edged it out...yours made more sense and was more enjoyable to me |
Shit messed that up meant to vote for a.m.o.k but I was gonna leave feedback for both...my bad
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Voted For: J_Trooper
Yo dog why waste ya time wit cats who spit like this man its not even funny. Seriously that shit was Garbage on some real shit. Vote goes to J Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: J_Trooper
This one was a close battle to call. Both of the verses were hot as hell. But I just felt more vibe comin from J Trooper. J Trooper had better structure and couple more punches. Overall my votes goin to J Trooper Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. Vote removed due to freeposting to 20 posts |
This was feedback posted for A.M.O.K
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This was feedback posted for A.M.O.K
A.M.O.K runs pass trash talking raps, moron flee fast
Cause I'll embrassess & drop 'J.T' like Cameron Diaz, good flow, good punch, nice wordplay. You've uploaded your Fams portrait onto you sig, kid & it's so obvious your the bitch wearing the white singlet, Decent punch.. this new battle system kinda fucked ya up.. cos it dont show sigs DO NOT ACT SMART NITWIT!!Follow what I say carefully I'd belittle his words.... but he does it by himself perfectly, wierd rhyme... ok punch Personals?You see, I'm full of them like matchmaker.com Unlike him... like a J_Trooper bout in EFL... you'll see none, first line was original... i liked it 'Born n the streets' huh?Only water squirts out of ya glocks W/ blanks your fire... it's clear you were raised on Writers Block, decent closer over: pretty good verse... was feelin most of ya punches... aight flow |
TRooper Got A Dick Rider.... Protoge Posted 20 Freeposts In National Security Thread.. Than When He Had Enough Posts To Vote (20) Voted J Trooper In My Battle.. And Now He Come Here In Troops Other Battle And Votes Him Agian....
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Voted For: A.M.O.K
j trooper u definetly had good verse but im sry amok came harder wit nice punches n personals i give dis vote 2 amok Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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