RymheReaper vs NoMercy
 

Battle Rules:

20 lines freestyle
No Recycling
No Biting

due in 15 min
spit a freestyle

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-01-04 at 03:21 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

NoMercy has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 03:22 PM.

RymheReaper has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 03:23 PM.

listen i dont front unless im forced to cuz somepeople, fags/
thinkin there hands full with 30 bags, so you think your rap legs?/.
the abily to spit vocab i agree how you kno me tho cuz ill beat yo down strong/
dont ever say im gonna lose i aint wrong, so im right i spit good songs/.
so far i never caught you token up in the back from a bong/
but probly do it when i dont look, probly think your cheech and cong?/.
what you toke strong and fast when i aint there who you think we be/
cant you see i shoot the three up, got some strong muscle cut you down thats me/.
caught you fuckin a tree you must of been embarrassed, "i hope"/
and you need to have a shower "fuck" you stink so bad and remember to use some sope/.
you fuckin chronic no one thinks you are dope/
your dicks so small you need to see it with a microscope/.
you tryin to pull on it but aint nottin but a thin rope/
you ask me to borrow a condom i say you to small so what the anser "nope"/.
askin who or who i be, ill get my brothers half bro to shoot you in the ass/
he'll drop you into a piece of glass, fly passed you cuz me and him in a higher class/.
i never stand down as a underdog ill try my best to win against the better cats/
but them bitch wannabes like you think there black with there gats/
and think they can shoot me up but with what!!/
i got gangsta's on my back with knifes, to stab you in the gut!!!/.

k thats my freestyle im goin out to smoek some dope peace!

Ite yo hyper extend you cellubrum let your brain go blank cast you-inta-darkness
Rip out you tonsuls and tounge leave ya ta-no-talkin like wackness you-be-walkin
Yo verbally break-ya-spine bluntly beat ya you been casted into a-lryical-mine
Yo burn ya cervix leave ya wita 5th-degree-burn like tha movi you made a-wrong-turn
Ya record repersents ya skill so-fa-rbehind unlike mine I actually havea mind
Yo rip out yo computer cords leave ya time-ta-prewrite cuz im tha rv-rappin-knight
Im-surprised you excepted this battle when ya know ill win its tim-u-realised

yo I couldnt mak 20 lines in 15 minthats impossible you prewrote that shit

Yo tha microscope line I seen that before but ill let tha mods see dat

uppin

Voted For: RymheReaper

NoMercy: Ya rhymes were kinda simple, and an ok flow

RhymeReaper: Rhymes were more complex then no mercy and had some good multi's

my vote: Rhyme Reaper

^fuck that uppin for honest votes in this ok!

ive never wrote this song before i just made it for the battle man honest i spit it fast im a king at freestyle man

20 lines was so easy i got it in like 10 min tops it was so easy man how can you not get that easy shit fuck

This was feedback posted for RymheReaper
 

these were both cool but work on hard disses aimed towards ur opponent

^wtf