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Dervla 01-02-06 10:13 PM

Flow Intelligent 1-0 vs Daubs 1-0 vs The Revelation 1-0
 
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218702

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FlowIntelligent. 01-02-06 11:43 PM

GL Daubs

Ill take the storylead

"I have to go back to jail... why?"

Can throw alot of true life emotion into this one

:thumbup:

Daubs 01-04-06 07:11 PM

check .

FlowIntelligent. 01-06-06 07:15 PM

This Topic Is Related To My Real Life Problems So It Was The Best One For Me To Choose


Im Going Back To Jail .... Why?


A month after release, Doing nothing but rapping to beats
I've had a rough decade just for strapping some heat
Parole hounding me to get a job, Easier said than done
All this stress quickly suffocating my chest and lungs
Plus my rent is due in a week, Only got lint in my jeans
So i gotta make it the dirty way, By hitting the streets
Catch a couple of licks, Just enough to get my head straight
Without hustling, My life would be compared to dead weight
I knew i should have stopped doing it, But i couldnt help it
Was it possible to make money legally? Am i this selfish?
But one day my life changed, I didnt think i'd hear it ever again
The same knock that landed me in prison for a seven to ten
The voice came louder than the pounding, "We know youre home"
As a sense of uneasiness and paraylsis straddled my bones
I clambered from the sofa, Not exactly sure of what to do
As the voice bellowed again, "I wouldnt run if i was you"

Sure i would be a goner if i bolted, I cracked the door open
And within a few seconds, I fell to the ground choking
"Put your hands on your head, Dont make a dumb move"
So i sat there motionless, As my home they ran through
The Feds tore my shit apart, All i worked for in every way
And it didnt matter what they found, I was done anyway
A violation of parole, Plus they found every ounce i had
My familys disowned me, I was already denounced as dad
Another man had tooken over, Now im known as a stranger
And back to prison i go, Right into the drone of danger
The interrogation room was dark and damp, slighty putrid
As the Feds shoved me around, Asking why i would do it
But i had no answer, There was an eerie silence in my mind
As i realized this was 3 strikes, no more free chances this time
With nothing to say or do, I sat there with tears in my eyes
With only one question left unanswered i just wondered why?

Willa 01-07-06 12:39 AM

good piece i vote for you........... lol
you should come to cs
you atticus king solo mentalz = pretty good topical roster

Mentalz 01-07-06 12:40 AM

and fathom this herpe monster.

Willa 01-07-06 12:45 AM

lol
oh
and mystic hes pretty cool
and that new kid suspicious from rb

DQ 01-07-06 05:09 AM

Vote// Flow Intelligent

FlowIntelligent. 01-07-06 01:02 PM

Ill think about it :thumbup:

King Solo 01-08-06 02:49 AM

I vote for Flow Intelligent.....
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.....to come to CS and shit.


Oh...uhm, yeah....he wins this battle to I guess. :thumbup:
Although I have to say, Daubs' verse was off the chain, what a use of complex vocabs for some powerful emotion and imagery.....DAMN!! :)

Daubs 01-08-06 05:13 AM

People not showing is gay init flow.

King Solo 01-08-06 06:36 AM

^ You are too funny. :)

FlowIntelligent. 01-08-06 12:17 PM

Yea it is Daubs :-\

Daubs 01-08-06 12:19 PM

Well i aint out so its aight, and i wrote and posted for that battle vs you where you didnt turn up -_-

Crazy Hades 01-08-06 02:58 PM

Battle is closed my nikkas. Daubs is 1-1.


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