"Come Get It"
 

YEEEAH!! The first track I laid after changing my name, you hear a big difference right off the dick. The quotables in this one are endless. Somethin for the Lyricists and something for the Ladies. The Rush! Apexx!! HOLLA!!

http://therushent.dmusic.com/ - "Come get ripped" (repaired broken link)


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Upperaging this!

Somethings wrong with how you uploaded it. It only plays 3-5 seconds.

Otherwise I'll holla back with feed.

Ez.

There's two on the page. I just deleted the one that didn't work. My bad.

uh huh. Repaired busted link. REEE-UUPPPPPAAAAAGGEEE!! Get your crunk sauce out for this one!!

lovin the yummy brigham beat.......

delivery is good on this...im likin it....

i think u should put a lil hook in this though...thats the only complaint.....

delivery is what really stands out on this track....lyrics are coo....but if this is goin on a mixtape....lyrics arent a big deal....reg people dont care.........good shit man...flow was on point well....

like i said...only complaint is there being no hook.........

weerd yo
this nice
that beat is hot, suits you real well i think
flow is on point entire time...dont find any flaws with it really
lyrics is hot too, (lmao @ the mexican line)..
emotion/delivery/voice package is great, really nailed it on the head there
quality is godly
theres really not much i dont like about this track
maybe a bit more dubs?
thats all i can really say...

good shit man, real quality stuff.

^^Good lookin man. DEF appreciate it. This is that Apexx music man - "Doomsday" is a thing of the past! THE RUSSHHH!!!


Oh yeah..uppin BTW.

Everybody without herpes should listen to this. If you have herpes...fall back.

I don't have herpes so I'mma listen. :thumbup: lol..

Feeling the beat a whole lot, aight i'mma kill you for not having a chorus. Time for 2nd listen, critique time.

Verse 1-
Your flow's best on this verse. I'm feeling the "past tense" line as well as your adlibs, you didn't overdo it on this track. Lyrics were straight.

Verse 2-
lol @ the mexican line. I like the fact that you use self-glorification through the track, but you say "I" and "I'm" a whole lot... like you can say phrases reflecting yourself without using "I" sometimes.. other than that, your lyrics were pretty straight. Flow was pretty decent.

Delivery and Presence, your presence is as always has been, pretty good. Your delivery is nice, you actually alert but laidback, which matches the beat pretty well. You got the uptempo feel but you not yelling across the track. Nice track. Add a mufukkin Chorus, nigga lol.

pretty decent track... not ya best but far from ya worst... quality is pretty straight... the mexican line was a lil outdated but ya flow was pretty cool throughout... ya kept it simple this time out... simple is safe... seemed more like a fun track... just sumn for you to do... no real concept behind it... just spittin some shyt while smokin' with the boys...lol.. not bad... definitely was thinking a hook woulda made it hotter... *agrees with Fiya*... i almost started singing one after the first verse...lol... good shyt yo

LF, word up to adjectives. Def right. And LMAO @ "add a chorus nigga" lol. I was thinking bout it then said ehh...fuck it. It's just a mixtape track. That hook woulda meant making it a full song, you know?

IllGramatix - where in rap have you heard anything about mexicans? :huh: I know I haven't, but yeah it's definitely a 'fun' track. Something you can lounge out too and feel good while it's pumpin, instead of that war kill destroy type stuff all the time. That breath of fresh air to all the other typical stuff out!

Up for you know what.

Beat:awesome...love it
Flow: good
Rhyming: not bad
Delivery: good


Overall: lovin the vibe here


7.8/10



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Listening..

The beat is ill.. just sounds ill.. first verse.. that past tense line was cool.. flow was on target.. lyrical content was pretty nice.. delivery was nice.. second verse.. mexican line was chill.. flow was still on target.. and the lyrical content was better in this verse.. delivery is what made this track though.. overall, good song.. sounded good throughout..