CarsonJet -v- Dope Name
 

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Dope Name

Easy...son...
U should've dropp'd wit some one u could carry..
Good news tho...
Dope,...U can visit Massachusetts now...and get married
My merkin's varry...yes, but u continue to lose even..
3 an 3...
Who's gonna break the news to ur L's that there now leading?
Really...
What your father called u as a kid, isn't what we mean
Dope? not really...Your just a confused R and B teen...
Competition's slow...consider urself a pick up herb...
Ironic tho...
They'll be doin that for U once they remover my words..
But hey..
Atleast ur in the right position,^Far away from me^...
Seriously....wait...
I merked you before...yo check your IP!

No need to rush this one,oh fine, I might as well take my time
Hell, he doubled my norm, but will that really double his rhyme
Have you tryin' to explain the loss when i bust the facts to ya
It must be hard battlin' now, your verses have to be on viagra
I'll take this one like a happy meal, but you, you have to steal
Do you think you win with flying colors when all you see is teal
Not a celtic man, so don't think about reppin a number 34 now
Say you win, you'll be lossed by ten, you sit and wonder how
Want me to give icin', I'll give you ricin, now you're sale pricin
Like satan, I'll stab you with a triton, and you leave frightened

:D this was fun...

Nice verse carson

Just as somethin' to say about the IP line

"You can drop a ball to the floor as many times as you want, but you never know if the next time you do it the ball will float to the cealing"

dayum...truthfully...this was a merking. Dope didn't even come bad at all...but Carson dropped hot today...one of his better verses infact.

"Easy...son...
U should've dropp'd wit some one u could carry..
Good news tho...
Dope,...U can visit Massachusetts now...and get married"

^Battle was basically over after that first bar was dropped lol.
Punchlines go to carson...same with flow...and pretty much everything goes to him. Good battle but carson came hella hard here. Enjoyed reading both verses.

v/ - Carson

uh.....carson, could you uh....kinda explain that line, it makes no sense to me, Getting married in massachusettes? yes because that was awesome :/ *I'm confused now*

I dont have to explain ne thing....
read the news son...

fair enough...

Got it

Yeah that was a really good punch

nice job...

Ummm...gays go to Mass. to get married i think..
that was a nice punch...Dope..didn't ne of yours except for tha
Teal one...both flow'd good in certain spots...
And tha ip line was a good personal too
both had okay wordplay...semi creative
but punches and personals won this
so

v/ Carson

flow-jet
structure-jet
punches-jet
personals-jet
creativity-tie

jet takes this battle easly...dope...you got merked this round

hit these up so i can battle again and i will return honest votes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111543
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111925

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*idea*

why don't you guys vote on my other battle...

Just a suggestion...