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Adam 02-03-09 11:44 AM

Rottweiler
 
Rottweiler

I have a dog inside of me,
A Rottweiler I think.
He's getting older
And stronger
And wants off his chain.
But I can't set him free,
At least where he wants.

I put him in there myself
Thinking it would be fine,
But I was wrong.
I wasn't misled
Or unconscious,
Nor intoxicated
So I'd have an excuse.
I put him in there myself,
I wasn't thinking of you.

one way 02-03-09 02:18 PM

pretty dope, short and basic but the message is clear. Good use of poetics. Well wrote.

Journal!st 02-05-09 10:59 PM

this was sick my fellow TE friend.
loved the motio nand it was short and sweet my dude.
props on this

fuck yuu 05-08-09 04:08 AM

2 links or im going to have to close this.

and for the feeders, try and leave better feed. Atleast 3-5 sentances


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