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Verdikal 02-22-05 05:46 PM

Buck.Shot vs Zeus'
 
Battle Rules:

6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 02-22-05 at 06:16 PM

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DQ'ed - more than 5 active battles open

System 02-22-05 05:48 PM

Zeus' has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-22-05 05:48 PM.

Verdikal 02-22-05 05:53 PM


This Kid Follows Kordozars "Crack" That's Why He's Known As DopeMan
He Could Get a 2 Vote Head Starts And Still Wont Get Any Votes Man
I KO'ed Him Once, But I Guess This Clown Could Resist Battling Again
So I'm Going To Assist This Kid Of The Premises, And Show Him A Legend
His Career Is Falling Apart Like A Broken Pipe On Thie Side Of The Street
Putting Hot Sauce On His Tounge Is The Only Way He'll Be Spittin Heat

*His Old Alias Name Is DopeMan
* I KO'ed Him With My Alias Name Eyedentity
*He Follows Kordozar All Over

System 02-22-05 06:08 PM

Buck.Shot has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-22-05 06:08 PM.

Dirty Nigga 02-22-05 06:15 PM

not even ''Dr.Seuss'' Could save this boys 'Rhyming'
Ya ''Text wouldnt Shine'' if they had a ''Silver''-Lining''
Its like we ''Wining n Dining''' Cause i ''Elegantly'' 'TAKE-YOU-OUT'
When it comes ta flows ya like a ''Nazi'..
..................an I didnt know ''God'' was a 'Kraut!'
I'ma put this battle Beyond Doubt, an end it like Woah...
Theres no lookin back now kid, like i just made you a ''Widow''!

Verdikal 02-22-05 06:19 PM

Alright Upping This Ish Here..........................................

Da_Throwdest 02-22-05 07:56 PM

Voted For: Zeus'

this was an 1-sided battle all the way out thru:
opener: zeus'
vocab: zeus'
structure: zeus'
multis: zeus'
closer: zeus'
zeus' just came harder & hit wit more punches thru the whole battle; buck.shot u need 2 elevate in ur rhymes & work on ur wordplay
make sure 2 return the favor

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Dirty Nigga 02-22-05 08:04 PM

Vote will be removed ^^^^^^^^^

Upping for REAL HONEST WELL EXPLAINED VOTES

An we will both return the favor

Verdikal 02-22-05 08:07 PM

Fo Sho, Fo Sho, ..........................................

L.A. 02-23-05 02:04 AM

This was feedback posted for Zeus'
 
Polls............................................. ...........................

Dirty Nigga 02-23-05 10:37 AM

I thought y'all was the same person? ^^^^^^
L.A & Zeus?

Uppin anyway

Verdikal 02-23-05 06:52 PM

We Is, Just To Lazy To Sign Of One And Go On The Other..............................

Red Stroke 02-23-05 08:01 PM

This was feedback posted for Zeus'
 
Upping This Ish............................................... .......

Verdikal 02-23-05 11:09 PM

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.Ike. 02-23-05 11:15 PM

Voted For: Buck.Shot

Zeus.........................
This Kid Follows Kordozars "Crack" That's Why He's Known As DopeMan
He Could Get a 2 Vote Head Starts And Still Wont Get Any Votes Man
ehh wasnt really feelin this...not a great opener...

I KO'ed Him Once, But I Guess This Clown Could Resist Battling Again
So I'm Going To Assist This Kid Of The Premises, And Show Him A Legend
Self glory....no point in this bar.....

His Career Is Falling Apart Like A Broken Pipe On Thie Side Of The Street
Putting Hot Sauce On His Tounge Is The Only Way He'll Be Spittin Heat
best bar here....but the punch was played man....


Buck SHot............
not even ''Dr.Seuss'' Could save this boys 'Rhyming'
Ya ''Text wouldnt Shine'' if they had a ''Silver''-Lining''
decent opener here...hit pretty well....

Its like we ''Wining n Dining''' Cause i ''Elegantly'' 'TAKE-YOU-OUT'
When it comes ta flows ya like a ''Nazi'..
..................an I didnt know ''God'' was a 'Kraut!'
liked the opener....punch was decent....

I'ma put this battle Beyond Doubt, an end it like Woah...
Theres no lookin back now kid, like i just made you a ''Widow''!
ehh ok closer...nothin special.....


basically this goes to buck shot because he actually threw punches...Zeus had self glory...and played punches...no hate to you zeus...but thats just the way i felt about it....Buck had some decent wordplay in his also....Zeus had better structure...but this goes to buck for harder hitting punches.....BUCK PLEASE RTF....link in sig


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