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big maze 03-16-04 04:07 PM

big maze vs. lyricalchick86
 
It's on

big maze 03-16-04 04:33 PM

You should'nt chose to battle me that was a mistake/
I heard you the new girl on this site that carried men traits
Oh I know you now, you the girl who can't get a mate/
Here's a little time to yourself.................I'm back did you masterbate?
After this battle I'll be your master and here's my first command/
I want you to suck me and my nigga dick while doing the handstand
I'm sure you got a good mouthpeice so lets put it in affect/
Have you told anyone bout your problem, you need water to get your pussy wet
I bet you got all types of toys just to make yourself nut/
Now you walk around funny cause the dildo gaot stuck in your butt

lyricalchick86 03-16-04 05:05 PM

Ok heres da chick jokes its gettin kinda old dont u think so
About me sukin yo dick da answer um........no
Wen u pulled it out it was a big mistake
It no bigger den my pinky for god sake
I hate niggas like u dat think dat dey gangsta
Wantin to be like 50 but he told u was a wanksta
U a gay as nigga dat look at my rhymes and cry
Did dey hurt ur feelings dat much srry boo boo i apoligize
Its sad dat u bouts to get beat by a grl
Wen im done ima have u wearin a fukin jerry-curl
In yo fukin rhyme u talk all about sex
Damn is it dat bad cause u aint had any yet
Lyricalchick den gon got her one
Dats it its ova u washed up n done

gangstagrl 03-16-04 05:20 PM

lyricalchick got dis cause she had a betta punches and a betta flow maze all u talked about was dat she was a chick n gettin head which is so played out elevate more

Vote disqualified for Cheating. You are no longer allowed to battle or vote on this site
- strobe

lyricalchick86 03-16-04 05:49 PM

thx fo da vote can we get somemore on dis peace

puertoricanelly 03-16-04 05:50 PM

PLEASZZZEE vote on dis shit

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...6217post1206217

lyricalchick86 03-16-04 05:54 PM

lol how u gon drop links on yo battle in not vote on ours

lyricalchick86 03-16-04 07:04 PM

would it hurt yall to vote on dis i kno dis shit whack but can yall vote so we can close dis

James West 03-17-04 12:22 AM

you killed him lyricalchick, this is the best verse I read from you so far, every line was good, and it had good structure, punches.

maze, your shit was good but the chicks was better this time around, but I thought you final 4 lines were better,

"I'm sure you got a good mouthpeice so lets put it in affect/
Have you told anyone bout your problem, you need water to get your pussy wet
I bet you got all types of toys just to make yourself nut/
Now you walk around funny cause the dildo gaot stuck in your butt"

the rest of the verse it just wasnt enouph to win.

Vote - Lyricalchick86

lyricalchick86 03-17-04 07:43 PM

Thx fo da vote can we gett somemore

Rising Sun 03-19-04 10:21 PM

lyrical chick got this one cause she had better flow, and better punches. all the dude kept talking about is sexuality which made it sound awkward. his point was clear but the flow was bad. lyrical chicks flow was bad, but it made more sense and it was harder. vote=lyrical chick. but both need to work on flow, metaphors, and wordplays. im currently doing that too
:thumbup:


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