(1-0) Premanition Vs New Meth0d (1-0)
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sorry to have to beat ya meth....
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I be quick to give premantions I split emcees like-fision
Only dreams u cud invision winning but that’s not my mission Dawg ya verse needs work, cause new methed brings the hurt Bury 6ft in dirt, ya lines older den the cum stains on cali’s ya shirt Ya aint walking-by-me, be cause im just too-high-see Don’t lie-b ima burn ya music and I don’t mean piracy ya multies der ka derrr lmoa wow thats all i gotta say |
Graphically Wack Im Scratchin Your Tracks While Cuttin Your Slacks...
Lyrically Lack Im Detatchin Your Back, Vertibrae Unfragilely Unstacked... Out With The Old In With The New? You Make That Phase Very Untrue... Up Goes The Fuss That 'U Through', Walk In Ur Shoe? Barefoot Sounds Coo... Freestylin You Improvisin, Then Fat Joe Exercisin And Einstein Revisin... I See You Cryin, Only Newbs Takin Ur Lie-In So Ya Image Rapidly Dyin... phuw.....tongue twistin uppin |
******oops...can someone delete that 1st one please ...i didnt finish....it was an error**********
~~~~~~~~~~~~~new method~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I be quick to give premantions I split emcees like-fision Only dreams u cud invision winning but that’s not my mission there was a multie in there but not too used...3/10 Dawg ya verse needs work, cause new methed brings the hurt Bury 6ft in dirt, ya lines older den the cum stains on cali’s ya shirt nice theres some multies in here .....6/10 Ya aint walking-by-me, be cause im just too-high-see Don’t lie-b ima burn ya music and I don’t mean piracy ok then......6/10 --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~premanition~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Graphically Wack Im Scratchin Your Tracks While Cuttin Your Slacks... Lyrically Lack Im Detatchin Your Back, Vertibrae Unfragilely Unstacked... try'n to use vocab like its really a factor in this battle aint work'n but i seen 1 multie connect so i'll give you that.....3/10 Out With The Old In With The New? You Make That Phase Very Untrue... Up Goes The Fuss That 'U Through', Walk In Ur Shoe? Barefoot Sounds Coo... o.m.g ...i think she's gunna beat you!!!.....1/10 Freestylin You Improvisin, Then Fat Joe Exercisin And Einstein Revisin... I See You Cryin, Only Newbs Takin Ur Lie-In So Ya Image Rapidly Dyin... i dont understand why you dont have multies...its not that hard....1/10 vote ...New Methods If any one has a problem with Multies and thinks they used them/i was wrong! then tell me so i can Bold the multies and show you... |
wot the fuck ^^^^^
graphically wack scratchin your tracks detachin ur back ^^^^these aren't multis? damn get this herb out of here |
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I be quick to give premantions I split emcees like-fision Only dreams u cud invision winning but that’s not my mission ^^assanasance ryhmin....no multi's Dawg ya verse needs work, cause new methed brings the hurt Bury 6ft in dirt, ya lines older den the cum stains on cali’s ya shirt ^^lol, but no multis Ya aint walking-by-me, be cause im just too-high-see Don’t lie-b ima burn ya music and I don’t mean piracy ^^^.lol, k theres no multi's in here..?.?.?..srry fam.. Graphically Wack Im Scratchin Your Tracks While Cuttin Your Slacks... Lyrically Lack Im Detatchin Your Back, Vertibrae Unfragilely Unstacked... ^^1st line was aight 2nd fell off from ryhme scheme Out With The Old In With The New? You Make That Phase Very Untrue... Up Goes The Fuss That 'U Through', Walk In Ur Shoe? Barefoot Sounds Coo... ^^no multis in that bar at all, look at it n you'll see prem Freestylin You Improvisin, Then Fat Joe Exercisin And Einstein Revisin... I See You Cryin, Only Newbs Takin Ur Lie-In So Ya Image Rapidly Dyin... ^^1st bar was good but 2nd fell off.... . match ya syllables up...remember 4 to a bar, i have yet to see any1 do that yet n not stretch there bars to 3 lines or more...... prem you got this but only cuz you had a couple multi's. .V/PREM to four lines |
aight i think both me and prem are confused here what the fuck is a multi in both daz and nitmares terms, honestly what is a multi .........i think your with me on this prem
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I be quick to give premantions I split emcees like-fision
Only dreams u cud invision winning but that’s not my mission ****ehh dcent but not good Dawg ya verse needs work, cause new methed brings the hurt Bury 6ft in dirt, ya lines older den the cum stains on cali’s ya shirt ***not really sure if this is good, but i guess ok Ya aint walking-by-me, be cause im just too-high-see Don’t lie-b ima burn ya music and I don’t mean piracy **i like the punch but ya choice of multies was bad Graphically Wack Im Scratchin Your Tracks While Cuttin Your Slacks... Lyrically Lack Im Detatchin Your Back, Vertibrae Unfragilely Unstacked... ****dcent, bunch of big words no real punch though Out With The Old In With The New? You Make That Phase Very Untrue... Up Goes The Fuss That 'U Through', Walk In Ur Shoe? Barefoot Sounds Coo... ***punch very funny...lead up was lacking Freestylin You Improvisin, Then Fat Joe Exercisin And Einstein Revisin... I See You Cryin, Only Newbs Takin Ur Lie-In So Ya Image Rapidly Dyin... ***1st line hot, the rest was ok... gotta vote prem on this one |
cool verse from both.
New Method's had a nice opener some nice vocab and a good on the multis. The close was nice, good metaphor but the multis wasnt working too good and i wasnt really feelin the rhymes. Overall the multis were good, and i aint saying i can do better but they were below Prem's in this battle. Premaniton's verse was full to the brim with complex multis, wordplay and tongue twists (as he did point out himself) Top verse with some good punches and nice metphors and it was directed at the opponant quite a bit too. Definately took this one i think ~Premanition |
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method get at me n ill show you what a MULTI IS.......PZ fam |
Ok Tha vote
------------ I be quick to give premantions I split emcees like-fision Only dreams u cud invision winning but that’s not my mission hmm last word first line confusin...ok bar....5/10 Dawg ya verse needs work, cause new methed brings the hurt Bury 6ft in dirt, ya lines older den the cum stains on cali’s ya shirt Kinda played stuff..decent......best line in the drop 7/10 Ya aint walking-by-me, be cause im just too-high-see Don’t lie-b ima burn ya music and I don’t mean piracy Its ok....second best i'd give it a 6/10 Iight Man....you did a decent job Meth..but that wasn't really multies...but decent drop overall 6/10 Next...Prem Graphically Wack Im Scratchin Your Tracks While Cuttin Your Slacks... Lyrically Lack Im Detatchin Your Back, Vertibrae Unfragilely Unstacked... Nice really feeling the multies used here......real nice man 8/10 Out With The Old In With The New? You Make That Phase Very Untrue... Up Goes The Fuss That 'U Through', Walk In Ur Shoe? Barefoot Sounds Coo... iight this wasn't ya best bar..but it was iight.....7/10 Freestylin You Improvisin, Then Fat Joe Exercisin And Einstein Revisin... I See You Cryin, Only Newbs Takin Ur Lie-In So Ya Image Rapidly Dyin... Nice...i liked this last line...was hittin..was feelin multies....7.5/10 Ok Prem came way harder in this..and it looks like he tried harder.....and came harder......meth you did iight...but Prem really got it......nice man... V/PREM |
I be quick to give premantions I split emcees like-fision
Only dreams u cud invision winning but that’s not my mission this shit was decent....coulda been harder....6/10 Dawg ya verse needs work, cause new methed brings the hurt Bury 6ft in dirt, ya lines older den the cum stains on cali’s ya shirt LOL shit was aiight...hmm i give this 6/10 Ya aint walking-by-me, be cause im just too-high-see Don’t lie-b ima burn ya music and I don’t mean piracy this shit wasnt too good...worded it bad 5/10 overall: this shit was decent but could of been harder......you had bad word choices for the multi's and you did the basic multi's thats good too.but the advanced multi's will give you a better change of winnin.. 18/30 Prem: Graphically Wack Im Scratchin Your Tracks While Cuttin Your Slacks... Lyrically Lack Im Detatchin Your Back, Vertibrae Unfragilely Unstacked... [b]This was fuckin sick right..yes these are multi's 8/10 Out With The Old In With The New? You Make That Phase Very Untrue... Up Goes The Fuss That 'U Through', Walk In Ur Shoe? Barefoot Sounds Coo... LOL second line was dope..first line...wasnt a good set up 7/10 Freestylin You Improvisin, Then Fat Joe Exercisin And Einstein Revisin... I See You Cryin, Only Newbs Takin Ur Lie-In So Ya Image Rapidly Dyin... Jea this was a dope closer.....8/10 overall: good shit dawg...i like how you used...punches....vocabulary...wordplay and multi's.....shit was dope..and the first 2 lines werent basic lines.....Dope shit fam 23/30 Vote: Premanition |
premanition wins 5-1
Premanitions new record 2-0 New methods new recrd 1-1 |
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